u kno da rules u spit first 16 bar max 10 min

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T.K.O is nothing 2 mess wit

waitin on u dog checkin in hahahahahahahahhahahahaa

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oh you fixed it good here we go checking in how many lines though(u no i don't want to waste too many good lines)

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16 bar max 10 bar min ........................................

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gotta go so ima post tomorrow u took 2 long u scerd

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this kid is calling himself TKO when he ain't even got no wins//
y you got pac as your rapper he a thug and you a good boy that don't commit sins//
when i battle you i commit five cause i kill ya//
i take you shit then a still bill ya//
i take gods name in vain like god damn this cat suxs//
i fucked your bitch for only a couple of bucks//
and then i disrepect you mom and dad//
i hate all these newb catz thinking that they bad//
you call your self a blimp because you easy to get popped//
and my ryhme skill can never be topped//
i say good bye and walk away then dude get him dropped//

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a yo blimp u hurry up n spit nigga lets c wut u got

yo yo

why u actin all amp nigga like u mean//
when my gun flip herbs like a trampoline//
i see da hate in ya lyrics but da envy it shows more//
on da net u play hard but u a fag behind closed doors//
i done red tagged nigga's and i done closed stores//
and stole yours plus my flow sharper than old swords//
im here now only jus 2 smash dis hata//
clap at his brains and turn it into mashed potato's/
so run from it and catch a back stinger//
and don't hate dat im rollin up blounts da size of shaq fingers//
so run along and get ya troops//
cause we got shells dats da size of fruit loops//
and we blast gunz da sameway we shoot hoops//
and da barrell stem like hot soup so nigga gimme ya coup//
u need paper pockets skinny like snoop//
da only tree's u got r da one's on ya boots//

so stop frontin

holla back

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ayo i was right this cat sux dick but let get some votes

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this kid is calling himself TKO when he ain't even got no wins//
y you got pac as your rapper he a thug and you a good boy that don't commit sins//
when i battle you i commit five cause i kill ya//
i take you shit then a still bill ya//
i take gods name in vain like god damn this cat suxs//
i fucked your bitch for only a couple of bucks//
and then i disrepect you mom and dad//
i hate all these newb catz thinking that they bad//
you call your self a blimp because you easy to get popped//
and my ryhme skill can never be topped//
i say good bye and walk away then dude get him dropped//
^^ you had a fairly nice verse with fairly nice punches and flow nice drop ur punches were nothing speciel but they got the job done fo'sho.... you verse was overall good if i had to rank it i would rank it a *7* outa ten
man structure u need to really work on that.. this made ur verse a lil worse than it actually was but it did not hinder your victory overall u had nice shit work on personals and flow and structure..

why u actin all amp nigga like u mean//
when my gun flip herbs like a trampoline//
i see da hate in ya lyrics but da envy it shows more//
on da net u play hard but u a fag behind closed doors//
i done red tagged nigga's and i done closed stores//
and stole yours plus my flow sharper than old swords//
im here now only jus 2 smash dis hata//
clap at his brains and turn it into mashed potato's/
so run from it and catch a back stinger//
and don't hate dat im rollin up blounts da size of shaq fingers//
so run along and get ya troops//
cause we got shells dats da size of fruit loops//
and we blast gunz da sameway we shoot hoops//
and da barrell stem like hot soup so nigga gimme ya coup//
u need paper pockets skinny like snoop//
da only tree's u got r da one's on ya boots//

^^ hata?.. mashptatos? how the hell does that rhyme keep ur structure and flow tight you need much work on structure and flow.. punches were weak and shit a 6th grader would say at recess homie...
keep workin and stay strong.....
my vote | aka for stronger punches and better flow and wordplay

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ok

i give this to a.k.a. his punches came a lot harder and he just had nicer flow and he hit with personals blimp you need to elevate and so do you a.k.a but aleast you made a attemp at punches word good job

v/ a.k.a.

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more votes kome on we ain't done

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ayo we ain't done here keep voting

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shadow got this...aka..your verse was okay...the flow was kinda off...and the punches were sorta weak but nothin horrible...and as far as you go shadow..that verse was nice..I liked the trampoline line that was creative...keep bangin folks

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