nuthin 2 dope, but its aiight.

ayo its AK commin through the party, 'dressed to impress'
got tha ice around my neck n a 'bullet proof vest'
whats more i got a straight fuken 'S on my chest'
any niggas that wan fuck around 'get put 2 tha test'
so im infiltratin smooth, wit a bitch on my lap
peeps holla from everywhere, shit, who them niggas up tha back
"ohh man, they them pussies from up a few blocks"
mu fuckas want shit cuz i stuck they nigga fo his rocks
lanky mu fucka, corn braids strolls up n says "WAS SUP"
"them niggas over there said U DUN FUCKED UP"
so i stood up quick, busted him hard in the nose
knocked his tall ass down, then the whole party froze
that crew from up back started runnin toward me
but by that time id pulled tha strap, "any yall wanna die G?"
so them niggas gave me space by that time my troops arive
one bitch was beggin fo me 2 keep his ugly ass alive
i stuck em fo they chains pistol whipped em wit a mac
then i rolled out tha joint in a black cadilac
..............thats class (wen i say cadilac, i mean old honda.. i wus like 17 lol)
but hold up, i aint done yet, i got a message to leave you
that pause was nuttin more then to give me a breath or 2
see later on them niggas came back n did a drive by
shot my man jamain in the stomach.. n got tray in the eye
it was a bad time for all of us, tha stormy weather
but tha rest of us got through this shit by stickin together
2 weeks later when the cops stopped aksin all them questions
we came through bought a used car n stockpiled some weapons
then one night, we caught most them bitches near they buildin
massacred they peep like I was rambo of tha street
you know how tha story goes, 2 my otha homies went to juvie
currantly state penetentiary, simply cuz they didnt do me
thats what stickin togethas all about, all yall no what i mean
stop starin through ya rear view, look ahead n catch tha cream
AK still on tha grime, even tho i got cash now
it dont change a fuken thing, u best be watchin ya mouth pal
im 22 years old, i got a long way to go
but when i die i hope i die high as shit, wit a hoe
u nooooooooooooooooooooo..................
see id rather die young while my dick still work
while my mind still at its prime and my eyes see fine
cuz my life, every day sumbody needs a chin check
i get respect, hit tha DECK, or you might get WET
but eventually u learn in life u gotta give before ya get
this aint a scripture, un-spoken rules or safty net
these r just sum niggas words n story of tha street
we all got sumthin to flow about when we hear a beat
fuck it im leavin now, ill see yall tomorro
where my bitches at, u.. u.. and u.. please follow.


i no it aint amazin, but it was a freestyle, when is that shit ever amazin na mean

gimme sum feedback

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was sup.. what chall think?

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yea it was pretty good good for a keystyle

this one of my old freestyles, i typed it up off a tape. just realised how that might sound weird about the takin a breath thing.

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