Something.. I Wrote A While Back... Tell Me Your Thoughts... And.. Opinions What I Could Improve And Work On...

I Would Highly Appriciate It....

This goes out to females who are emotinal from a distance,
Patience is a virtue? Yeah right, check this for instance,
There's this female named danielle she had it really hard,
Family don't like her and her boyfriend is a lard,
Mentally, Physically this lady is good and able,
To work, her broke ass is too hook on video game and cable,
danielle's loser boyfriend is the epitome of the word sloth,
Leaching to the point where the girl is stressed and pissed off,
Crying at work, i try to be comforting when i can,
My shoulders are always available i'm her friend dying to be her woman,

*Fuck this is my dilemma. As her friend i can't intervene,
Can't afford to have ulterior motives known or to be seen,
Guys if you knew her, you'll be like lil swirl I know what you mean,
Be honest and supportive, your reality soon won't be a dream,*

I know love doesnt happen over night
the shit takes time, first we got to be tight,
Her Internal Beauty just glows effortlessly on her skin,
My feelings for Danielle drives me crazy and dont know where to begin,
It's strange not only do i want my tongue inside her,
I want to be her friend, her woman and her soul love provider,
Patience. good things come to those who wait,
When it comes girl, I promise i'll try to be a supper mate,
Keep your head up though, life will change for the better,
Who knows maybe we'll hook up together,
Yeah i wish but if not i'll always be your friend,
Your nice and cool and i'll always have a hand to lend,

*To You*

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