Death comes to us all its only mater of time..........
F**k.... I can get killed for just writing this rhyme....
That's just the life we live I have noting else to give in this lonely life of sin....
Just waiting for my life to end........
I want to be here for a reason something for the best pleasing .....
This is coming from my heart this sh*t is tearing me apart....
Living My Life As a Young Buck knowing my life when I grow up is going to be f**k up.....
Life is not what is seems.......
ill never get to see my dreams come true this is what a f**k up life can do to you...
im just A lost case one big f**king living disease... I droop down on my knees begging god please.....
Living this life inpurpose for no purpose.......
Life is really f**k up in these end of days i look up in the sky and wait for the day... for when he comes back how phat will be......... that day when there is no more pain and suffering....

Where taking are lives for granted this is not the way God plant it we must stop now and change are evil ways for this is what
God wants thank him for giving are living days.........

Good subject(s). Nice overall flow. Main thing hit me while readin, was some wordz -needed- their 'ed' suffix cuz it made it seem like wordz were incomplete.
enjoyable with a touch of 'heavy' <God and self>.

...Teazer...


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