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06-27-04, 01:43 AM | #1 | ||||||
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my 1st free style
IP: DFB9 A5A2
My rhymes are corrosive
My flow is explossive The best of BX in case you dont know this Treat you lil bitches like trash I got yall so scared u hidin in garbage bags You fuckin fag Faggot You cant touch me My rhymes go at You so fast you can't see After I'm done you can't speak You messin with tha fatal 1 After I slice you you'll be prayin to god, son Shit I aint done Come at me I cut punk ass bitches for fun you faggots betta run If u can't get your hands on a gun Cas I can't stop you'll drop straight plup You'll fall this is war Smoke you lil cowards like blunts And i aint even done yet
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06-27-04, 11:36 AM | #2 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
Wack Wack and wack and wack oh did i forget wack? ^^
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06-27-04, 12:40 PM | #3 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 396C 9E65
You need to elevate but stick around, check out some other OM's and you'll get better
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06-27-04, 12:49 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
yea. work on your word play n shit son.
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06-27-04, 04:34 PM | #5 | |||||
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To: Young01/wanna battle? lol
IP: DFDD 3A5C
ya rhymez are corrosive, n yeah you explosive/ but I'm smokin'/ as I get promoted/ ta top dawg/ you frum BX, I'm frum Phoenix/ not Arizona..I'm talkin' bout tha block, I'm frum Cali son, n my heat pops off/ hidin' in garbage bags? nigga you drag, on tha end of my nutts, first fa first freestyle homie, ya gotta work ta come up..you bluff, sayin' you'll toke me likah blunt, you betta shut up..you got madd dellusion, how many times you done drugs? how many words you seein'?/ from these lyricz that I'm typin', I'm tha illest net battler, try ta come up off me, I'll leave ya like Jack tha Ripper, woulda..you ain't as ill as me, no New Yorker/ will ever be/ from tha top of tha World Trade, ta tha fuckin' Atlantic sea/ homie..how fatal can you be, typin' words on'a screen? You'll never kill me, ya rhymes are weak, ya speech iz bleak, n its all "blah blah.."/ ain't nothin' I ain't ever heard, you just anotha flaw/ bout ta get scrapped off, tha street/ or rather tha internet...nobody wants ta read ya rhymes..cuz they love the WEST!!
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06-27-04, 08:49 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: DFB9 A5A2
thanks 4 the feed back and honesty appreciate it.I can only get betta.
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06-27-04, 09:11 PM | #7 | ||||||
Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
put more words in each line its too short to find a punch & shit like that anywayz stay up and elevate! ~I.S.~
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06-27-04, 10:05 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 155B DF27
ya son dont get down homiee .. obviously new to this but we all were at one time or another .. keep spittin and keep reading .. read the cats who are really good on this site (not many) .. and learn from them .. try to work on wordplay, similies, metahz, etc .
stay up homiee
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06-28-04, 02:49 AM | #9 | |||||
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Yeah i know...but oh wells..
IP: EFB4 4A4D
Its okay Young...didn't know that you didn't wanna battle...but if thats your pic i saw...dayum girl your fiiiiine!!!!! hehe! and yeah..you can get better...and Metah, I'll go to the good people on this site...but how can you be an MC at all..and not know how to rhyme worth a shit...I mean common..I have fuckin' experience...i ain't just some new kat off the street who never used a computer or never flowed before...I'mma savage dawg...i thought you knew...oh yeah and Young i got you on yahoo too...so holla at me sometime aiight...lates.
Last edited by PLaTiNuM TeDdii : 06-28-04 at 02:52 AM. |
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