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aight check'n shit

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<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

They call this cat Flash, cuz he gets merked in an instant/
Like instant mashed potatoes his REALNESS is subliminally distant/
I'm really feelin ya in your signature, I gotta say I love da picture/
I took a look at your Poetic Scriptures, and THREW up more then a pitcher/[check out da link at da bottom of his signature]
I'll cut ya up like scissors, u a poodle, I'ma doberman pincher/
Your rhymes should be held to a curfew, but I'm da lyrical Cinderella/
Cuz I'ma pull some magic on ya, and BEAT u in an acapella/
We agree on one thing, 2PAC is a legend in this so called game/
My rhymes are young and fresh, yours are so old and bald, its lame/


spit ya best man

EVERYBODY VOTE

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<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

drop a vot ein this battle and ill get back to u http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811

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upp'n fo your verse man

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<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

people go against you can be like 50..aint even gotsta try tah rhyme...
Taking one look at your rhymes is like taking a look back inta time...
Kid gets caught prewrittin like Bill Clintons "Monica Lowinski'sCapitol Affair
Like Bill Clinton you rhyme like you scared and not very aware...
Only way you could be Syck if you had cought a case of AIDS...
Saw his picture on buddy pic and hes a white boy with braids...
ur wack and just crazy! u 'gettin fucked all the time' what do u rap as a lady...
i mean once he 'hit his spit' his Rep Dropped faster than Arnold back in the 80's...
......ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness......
hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with...

people go against you can be like 50..aint even gotsta try tah rhyme...
Taking one look at your rhymes is like taking a look back inta time...
Kid gets caught prewrittin like Bill Clintons "Monica Lowinski'sCapitol Affair
Like Bill Clinton you rhyme like you scared and not very aware...
Only way you could be Syck if you had cought a case of AIDS...
Saw his picture on buddy pic and hes a white boy with braids...
ur wack and just crazy! u 'gettin fucked all the time' what do u rap as a lady...
i mean once he 'hit his spit' his Rep Dropped faster than Arnold back in the 80's...
......ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness......
hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with...

lol this was prett close battle but i gotta give it to.................................Flash...

flash:
you had some nice punchlines...decent flow..and i liked those little links you used...they were really usefull....multies decent...overall you had a nive verse and you really impressed me nice battle

mc:
damn son y0u had a nice verse...punchlinse were decent..but they werent good enough to beat mc riot....multies were decent,,,,personals... were iight but overal i gotta give this to flash

[b]VOTE=FLASH

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upp'n shit

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<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

uppin

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<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

mc riot - nothing special...spat basic weak lines....nothing amazing....no good meta's or personals....go straight at him....flow was ok....just work on u whole punches....yeah....give it a 2.3/10....

flash - u easily beat him with punches and personals....u ahd meta's.....u had way better flow.....better wordplay.....more complex shit....and merked his verse....simple and easy battle....give it a 6.2/10

vote - flash...

i give it to flash by way of punches and wordplay
vote-flash

Aaah nice nice....

Mc - You got some weak shit poppin there. I think if u take ur time and re read what u write u can accually do better i mean look at this closer

We agree on one thing, 2PAC is a legend in this so called game/
My rhymes are young and fresh, yours are so old and bald, its lame/

Wtf is that???

/\ weak man weak

Flash - Nice personals, good word play, uhh okay structure.. okay flow

ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness......
hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with...

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Lol nice u twisted it i like that...

Vote: Flash

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