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Old 06-17-04, 09:08 AM   #1
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Angry Let's go bitch

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Yo its my time ta shine so its on now
Um da king round here so niggaz betta bow!!
So u betta serve me cus um ya masta
U might be quick but "Dogg" um fasta!!
Cus right now I feel like um up on top
Like DMX said nigga open up shop!!
Think fast nigga cus it will go pass quick
Um ah devious nigga and I'm kind of slick!!
Thats who I am thats my personality
If I shoot a nigga now its cus of his nationality!!
But its alright life goes on am I right
But not for u dogg cus ya dyin to night!!
Some people call me a cold hearted killer
But Micheal Jackson's the one whos da real thriller!!
U dont see me throwing kids over walls
Or touching little boys up around da balls!!
So dont talk about me if u dont know me
Da only thing special about me is that um ah O.G!!
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Old 06-17-04, 09:31 AM   #2
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it was ok i was feelin the rhymes and all i think it just needed a little elevation.....
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Old 06-17-04, 01:50 PM   #3
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yeah like insane say elevate ur rhymes & keep it real wit da public as well as urself no diss
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