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| $iK |
  
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5 | 71.43% |
| -SwizZ- |
  
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2 | 28.57% |
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05-23-04, 01:50 AM
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Free AgeNt
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$iK vS -SwizZ-
IP: 6C7A 3231
10 Lines U know Rules
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05-23-04, 02:04 AM
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IP: 2F05 D129
Check Check...
Tha only reason ur "SwizZ" is, no~one "Spits That Wack" Are leave ya lyrics "Broken" from my "Sadistic Phat Attack" Ya "Reppin Tha Underground" may~be if~ya "Alive Inside Ya Coffin" Im "Flippin Him Around" like~a FLOPPY in~ya DISC~"DRIVE DENIDE Ya Stoppin" Den i tatto ma rhymes on ma dick to "Put Words Into Ya Mouf" Kick ya from tha North to tha East to tha West "But Miss Tha Souf" (South) Uppin for ur verse |
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05-23-04, 02:05 AM
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IP: 2F05 D129
Fuck his "Dial Up Tone" arl strangle him with the internet "Cord"
Like~a "File on Word" arl always disply Rich-Text on dis "Board" Den "Freeze His Face Ta White" spit~a punch 'n' "Shatter His Dreamz" Deaths cummin "Quicker" than a "Killer On Speed" all a can hear is Scripts "Screamz" |
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05-23-04, 03:47 AM
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IP: 6C7A 3231
Yo.....
First Off...Let Me Say That This Kid Needs SpeLLCheCk.... My Rhymes So Devestatin...It Leaves Him With A =Wrecked= =Neck=.... He New To The Board...And Already Got RejeCted From the BluePrint Krew... This Kid So Skared The Way He Asked To Battle Me Was Quote:
His Rhymes Wouldnt Be "SiK" If IT Was Left Out IN Da Cold... The Only Way This Kid Can Be Darin If His Words Were in BOld...* Ya Punches Are Played....Why Dont You Change Ya Style.... This Kids Lines Are MOre Stretched Than Damn 5 Aisles......** I Got This Kid Prayin To Get A Vote More Than Priests Do.... GOODLUCK Sik..But This IS Gonna Be Ya First Lost Since Ya Debut.. EXPLANATIONS * Bold Means To Be A Heroic Danger-Free And Fearless Get It ? **Aisle 5 If You Dont Know Him Dont Vote On Battle....... If You Do Not Get Any Explanations Dont Vote On This Battle GL |
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05-23-04, 03:54 AM
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#5
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
Urmm this was a alright battle
Ya both needed wordk on the structure......flow goes to $ik he just came harder .Punches goes to Swizz he had the line about debut that was good.The personal goes to swizz he had took that he had 1 personal.Word Play goes to $ik he had some good wordplay in his rhymes. I think $ik took this 1 because of this line Den "Freeze His Face Ta White" spit~a punch 'n' "Shatter His Dreamz" Deaths cummin "Quicker" than a "Killer On Speed" all a can hear is Scripts "Screamz" Overall-$IK
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05-23-04, 03:57 AM
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IP: 2F05 D129
1-0 me........................uppin for more votes
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05-23-04, 04:03 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 8D4A 5365
yo woz quite n aiight battle. sik u did aiight dawg, i woznt feeling tha flow and tha structure. lyrics were aiight but i think it woz too hard to read. remember its text so its gotta be easy to read. lyrics were aiight and punches were pretty gud man. a few hot lines in there : Ya "Reppin Tha Underground" may~be if~ya "Alive Inside Ya Coffin"
Im "Flippin Him Around" like~a FLOPPY in~ya DISC~"DRIVE DENIDE Ya Stoppin" that woz ma fav line. but i think u stretched ya lines a bit too long too. swizz ur verse woz aiight too. bit stronger punches and ya verse woz easier to read. it woz quite close but im a give it to swizz coz i thought it woz easier to read and tha flow woz a lot better. vote = swizz -1-
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05-23-04, 04:04 AM
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#8
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Free AgeNt
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IP: 6C7A 3231
Aight Thnx For Vote^^ Styll Uppin
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05-23-04, 04:17 AM
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smiley on ya mothers
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IP: 9233 05F7
swizz won this battle.. sik almost all his lines were absolute trash..lmao haha seriously.. swizz had some nice personals and punclines in his verse i liked how he added the quotes in and it still rhymed with his previous lines.. very clever..
vote- swizz he just had the better disses in this battle.. sik had attempted disses but they flopped.. plus that line about putting words in your mouth i heard that shit on comedy view.. plus why would you want to put your dick in another mans mouth? just doesnt seem right..lol
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05-23-04, 04:19 AM
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Free AgeNt
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IP: 6C7A 3231
LOL $IK Dont Bite On This...........No B33f IIGHT Styll Uppin 2-0
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05-23-04, 04:21 AM
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IP: 2F05 D129
heh.....................its supposed to be 2-1...but KillaCamFlow didn't vote in the poll......jesus
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05-23-04, 01:27 PM
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#12
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Free AgeNt
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IP: 6C7A 3231
Still UPPIN WiLL RETURN FAVOR IF U DROP A LINK
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05-23-04, 02:22 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
Swizz-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really .....you had everything uncluding similies and metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there...... $ik-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more work.....But keep elevatin and work on alot of things v/Swizz
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05-23-04, 03:55 PM
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IP: 7B18 8F28
Den "Freeze His Face Ta White" spit~a punch 'n' "Shatter His Dreamz"
Deaths cummin "Quicker" than a "Killer On Speed" all a can hear is Scripts "Screamz" that line did it for me sik had the multis vocab n complexity. it was a tie in the punches department and swizz had the flow. pretty close battle
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05-23-04, 04:28 PM
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IP: D666 F54C
This was a pretty close battle... I think that Sik had a good flow, and a couple of his punches were pretty good, but I know I;ve heard that Put words in ya mouf line before... I think swizz had more original punchlines in his verse but it didn't flow as nice, his structure however was better. Ima have to break it down between each of your best bars....
Ya "Reppin Tha Underground" may~be if~ya "Alive Inside Ya Coffin" Im "Flippin Him Around" like~a FLOPPY in~ya DISC~"DRIVE DENIDE Ya Stoppin" Wordplay = 9 Punchline = 8- It was good Creativity = The first line kinda kills this cuz its not the most original concept but I give a 7 Structure= 7- Not bad but the second line kinda stretches I Got This Kid Prayin To Get A Vote More Than Priests Do.... GOODLUCK Sik..But This IS Gonna Be Ya First Lost Since Ya Debut.. Wordplay = n/a Punchline = 7- It was good but not great Creativity = Nothin amazing here, decent flow and all but no new concepts, a little personal in there so Ima give it a 7 Structure= 7- Not bad but the second line kinda stretches also After looking through both verses again I think that Sik had harder hitting punchlines he had more wordplay in it and I just liked the verse overall more... Vote Sik... Good battle yall good luck in the future.
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