ok this is a crew battle... verses due by thursday at midnight... 10 lines house rules... first crew to win 2 battles wins

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My Lines Are ILL yo

alright mishap here im ready to battle but got2 wait till tonight so murk you then!

iight im checkin in..i'll drop sumtime tonite

im chekin in ill spit rite now if yall dont mind

no thats cool mishap go ahead

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My Lines Are ILL yo

boy these sinkin hits will destroy this bitch..... leave him wreckless
if i was 'orlando' u still couldnt 'de-feat' me n leave me 'legolas'(leg less)
im like yo mechanical pencil, wit each click the led sends out rewritin ur scripts
im ignitin with clips…you n winning wont happen like Bloods unitin wit Cryps
several MCs try to steal my crown......... with the shit yo spit yo nouns will drown
ur ass wont take me down yo drops 'cheap' like red alert sales at shoppin towns
your rhymes are about as real as blind people claimin that ufo sightins exist
so good at ‘cuttin’ mc’s in half that most claim that im simply excitin wit ‘snips’
i’ll leave this amatuer surrounded-in-pain cuz the two thins he lacks are talent-n-brains
crazy like ‘wonderland’ to think he can beat me im keen to leave him dead like Alice-in-Chains

pay attention cuz its not that difficult/
u know that twisted government got the tightest municipal/
its pointless to battle cuz you flow to simple/
ya like a disney show cause rhymes always got a principle/
not a wrongful death i wanted to squish this beef/
now u walk around with a hole in you the size of a christmas reef/
i just missed his teeth but i hit him in his neck/
and his atoms apple fell down the side of his back/
e-dubz u got no style u cant fuck wit me/
im the true reason they made the word emcee...........

uppin fo votes

give us some votes

hahahaaaaa hell ya thatz my boi e-dubz, i think thatz our first vote...

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*ouR firsT wiN*

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uppin..dont sleep

lol....damn this battle was easily e-dubz from the begging ... e-dubz you had a better verse overall you had some hot punchlines...nice personals..and you ahd some nice...flow....

but mishep your flow was off at times...multies....Well were none...punchlines were str8 but werernt hitting hard....structure was basically the only thing you had in your verse .... and thats bascially why you lost... you really need to lrarn how to put punchlines..and personals in your verse

v e-dubz

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uppin...............