Battle Rules:EVERYTHING GOES I'M NEW SO LETS GET THIS SHIT STARTED

6 - 16 lines MaX
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Check in by: 08-17-04 at 07:18 PM

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INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:49 PM.

FLiP AkA JR has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 06:54 PM.

Ok so u think u got what it takes 2 battle me kid?
I'm bout 2 eat that ass up overstand, underdig?
I'm a real life gangsta and this kids is a phony
wanna battle me huh... cuz u'ont even kno me
I'll break u off real proper...and I'ma do it thug style
Cause I got the game chained up and I ain't lettin u out
U think cause u a newbie too, that u can just merk me out cuz
do u even realize u fuckin wit a real life thug?
Dogg... I don't think u do cause I'll body u kid
or make u shoot urself wit ur own gun, like Cheddar Bob did
when I read ur first bar I'ma have ur personals
in the mean time I bet ur rhymes, IS submersible
I'm just goin finish u off quick, cause u ain't on my level fam
u couldn't burn me if u approached wit a live grenade nya'hand

Inflammable? Nah I smoke his “L" got him lookin “infammible,”
Tried to Eat my rhymes, but my punch line hit and blew this cannibal//
My rhymes flow like Air that keep my throat from chockin’,
You smoke puffs through ya asshole to get ya rhymes smokin’//
My punch lines protect Real Mc, seein me Gettin' no hits by his hit,
You Stick ya “rhymes back in your asshole” becuz you say the “Same-shit”//
Cloths wearin red white and blue thrown in the air like An American flag
Blast rhymes hard, Got his Heart runnin for his life like a heart-attack//
I battle Face to Face wit rhyme ready to shoot personals,
His crew blew like his Team-rocket away, now got him seein “Double-trouble”!//
My rhymes to intense while I think what I write, got my computer to overload,
Put “propane in his head” while he “light the stage up,” now watch him “Explode”//
I stress wit no sleep, mind wit ease got my eye to see pinkeyes,
While I Stuck “rifles in his heart” to get him “feelin'” what he’s “aiming in life”//
You couldn’t bite my rhymes, so here pay-it-off, it’s a dolla-a-track,’
I’m from “holla-front.com,” last line so I’ll fare-a-well you wit a “Holla-back”//

nice drop infammible.....i mess up dat punchline........its suppose to say

you "smoke puffs through ya asshole" to get ya "shitty rhymes smokin"

ight well uppin votes i guess.....

I'll give u the fact that u got a few punches on me but thats it
Then u lost ur flow in the middle, c'mon this is some bullshit
And the name's "INFALLIBLE!!!) u illiterate ass nigga
Which means I'm perfect cuz, just put me up there wit Jigga!

hahahah oh daymit, well i think datz a BIG BOO BOO fo me....daymit!! :O well dat fuck my personal line up my bad... shit

y0 infallible, why can't i see the feedbacks of other peoples thread?

4 r battle or 4 other ppls battles?

never mind infammible. i got it lol just mess around on this website till i get da hang of it thks anywayz...

just to let cha know, i'm still here wating for votes come out...

uppin votes still, upin votes still...........................

Voted For: INFALLIBLE

Vote: Infalliable

Lyrics: gots to got him cos dey more complex and actually make sense

Structure: his lines are obvious direct and parralell. He'd b able to spit dis easy

Personals: hes got a few but flips got mo even if dere a bit used and weak

Other: A lot of flips shit was off-beat and wud sound crap. B interestin to try and hear him spit this and stay on beat

So in conclusion infalliable wins he ripped flip keep trying got a long way to go. L8r peace

Check my battles:

Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM
Elusiv G vs. Slick Skillz
Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc

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