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CDbreaker 0 0%
DoubleEdge 5 100.00%
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Old 06-18-04, 10:21 PM   #1
DoubleEdge
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DoubleEdge vs. CDbreaker

IP: EC0B 84C7

3-5 bars, check in, due by tommarow, you spit first. good luck.

Peace
 
Old 06-18-04, 10:51 PM   #2
CDbreaker
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checkin in, but u gonna beat u! peace"..........."
 
Old 06-19-04, 12:00 AM   #3
DoubleEdge
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fuck it, I'll jus spit:

tongue twisted, ya mist it, lost all ya class/
couldn't exstinguish heat, with a match to ya ass/
buyin albums like G unit, you both be the fakers/
so I'm crushin ya disk, like my profession was CD Breaker!/
take it or leave it, failure you breath it/
still fallin behind, attempt tailin achievement/
lookin at ya air flares, boy, they still lack execution/**
logic like reverse psychology, 'cause you brag about losin/

** Air flares are a breakin move he's workin on.

post soon, peace
 
Old 06-19-04, 12:16 AM   #4
CDbreaker
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Cool your gonna loose with these ill lines

IP: 1072 6518

im a 8th grade kid with crazy skill/
im a killa with words cuz my rhymes r ill/
everyone on this site is thinkin' they can rap/
but they really can't rhyme their words worth crap/
you cant freestyle you should just pass/
cuz when its all over you'll be kissin' my a$$/

peace out
 
Old 06-19-04, 09:46 AM   #5
CDbreaker
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Come on! VOTE!!! peace out
 
Old 06-19-04, 11:31 AM   #6
For$akeN
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DE DROP:

tongue twisted, ya mist it, lost all ya class/
couldn't exstinguish heat, with a match to ya ass/
GOOD OPENER NOT THE BEST THO 7/10
buyin albums like G unit, you both be the fakers/
so I'm crushin ya disk, like my profession was CD Breaker!/
GOOD HOW YOU USED HIS NAME AGAINST HIMSELF BUT NOT A VERY GOOD PUNCH 6.5/10
take it or leave it, failure you breath it/
still fallin behind, attempt tailin achievement/
THAT WAS YOUR WORST LINE YET JUST WEAK 5/10
lookin at ya air flares, boy, they still lack execution/**
logic like reverse psychology, 'cause you brag about losin/
GOOD HOW YOU DID THE OPPOSITE AND SHIT 6.5/10

OVERALL: 6.2/10

CD'S DROP:

im a 8th grade kid with crazy skill/
im a killa with words cuz my rhymes r ill/
NO PUNCH JUSS BRAGGIN ABOUT YOURSELF 2/10
everyone on this site is thinkin' they can rap/
but they really can't rhyme their words worth crap/
DISSING EVERYONE EVEN YOUSELF. WEAK 2/10
you cant freestyle you should just pass/
cuz when its all over you'll be kissin' my a$$/
ONLY PUNCH IN YOUR DROP 4/10

OVERALL: 2.6/10

DO A HONEST VOTE ON MY SHIT THE LINKS IN THE SIGNATURE.
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Old 07-02-04, 02:39 PM   #7
Miss. Lyricist
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My vote has to go with DoubleEdge, because you can't use self-glorification in a battle CD. You've got to attack your oppenent, not brag about yourself.

Double, you had some nice punches and personals. Structure was good, but could be better.

vote- double

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Old 07-02-04, 02:46 PM   #8
Durmil
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^^^^word

DE took this in all categories basically....CD breaker u just need to elevate some more wit ur versus...keep at it

Vote-DE

can you drop honest votes on my battles:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132724
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132597

thanx homies....p
 
Old 07-02-04, 03:10 PM   #9
illiance
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Double edge: not bad, had potential an a few personals so its all good although you probably didn't need much to beat Breaker, could do with some more complex rhymes though but otherwise its all good.

Breaker: basically up your game 100%, be clever if you don't wannabe a wannabe. Read other peoples battles for tips and take heed of critisicm.

Vote: Doubledge
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Old 07-02-04, 08:16 PM   #10
Yehti
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-Doubleedge.
tongue twisted, ya mist it, lost all ya class/
couldn't exstinguish heat, with a match to ya ass/
flow was coo, multi was aight, punch was weak
buyin albums like G unit, you both be the fakers/
so I'm crushin ya disk, like my profession was CD Breaker!/
flow was coo, multi was streched a lil', punch was aight, would've been better worded differently
take it or leave it, failure you breath it/
still fallin behind, attempt tailin achievement/
liked the flow, co multi, punch was wack
lookin at ya air flares, boy, they still lack execution/**
logic like reverse psychology, 'cause you brag about losin/
flow was average, punchline was aight, wording is off


-Cdbreaker.
im a 8th grade kid with crazy skill/
im a killa with words cuz my rhymes r ill/
average flow, no punchline
everyone on this site is thinkin' they can rap/
but they really can't rhyme their words worth crap/
average flow, weak diss
you cant freestyle you should just pass/
cuz when its all over you'll be kissin' my a$$/
average flow, weak diss


Overall, Doube got this. He had the wittier lines, more complex flow, and a little more creativity. Double, work on your wording and creativity some more. You're getting close to being decent mayne. Cd, work on creativity, a more complex flow and forming punchlines. Keep at it duns.

Vote - DoubleEdge.
 
 


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