aight
house rules (no dick ryding, non of that bs, no prewrittens (key it),voters must have 100+ posts to vote, and we drop 20 minutes after this is posted..
5 bars (10 lines).. Good Luck =)

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Checking in.. im bout to key my shit up right now..

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Alright im checkin in, good luck, ill spit right after u

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im sayin.. we just drop at the same time, to avoid feeding of each others verse.. mine will be done in like 10 minutes... ima drop mine at 12:20 (its now 12:02)... cause its quite easy to beat sumone if you go after them, or it should be

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Oh alright then i will get mine in at 12 20 just like you

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aight yo check it...

spitaflame? na you not gassed, i'll take the F outcha name/
follow instructions and you'll see me beating this Spitting-Lame/
like one-eyed-pilots,purblind-pirots, no visions of "raps" in his sight/
when hes flyin-blindly-through clouds, only way percipitations left iced/
this kids a pigeon, no real material, extensivly bittin-bars/
"hawkin" back lugies the only sounds iv heard-of-you spittin hard/
im way-then-better, verses me he like hellen-keller dropped-in-pools/
like pit-stoppin to toilet seats, his ass is just floppin-in-stools/
punchline this massive "shawty" so hard, he takes flight into the air/
the funny thing is, his bodies elevating while his arms and legs are still there!..

explanations if needed...
*first bar means to take the F outa his name, and it spells "SpitaLame"..
**second bar, means he freezes percipitation in the clouds cause basically sucks, opposite his name...
***hellen keller is blind.. so shed most likly die if dropped in a big enuff pool.. again refering so me drowning him in my spits..
****the last bar lol.. just think of a mr potato head... got him?.. now kick him across the room.. his arms and legs most likley come off when his body flys lol... just for kicks i guess

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Your piss poor, now thats what i call whack rappin..
You get no votes like a match that never happen...//

To get on my level you gotta take an extra flight of stairs,
God let it be known you still lose despite of prayers//

I spit mo fire then that dragon in shrek
You cant spit back like i was gaggin ya neck//

Your like weed cause all i do is smoke you,
Your like a knock knock rhyme cause your a joke du//

After i drop my verse yo chit chat Seise,
Take it from your sig, your done peace//

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fuck.. stool is another word for shit, or excrament... so yea.. hate that you cant edit...

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Nice verse, and its all good yea not editing sucks lets get some votes

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Hoops
get rid of the - - and "" between and around ur words...thats newbish...structure was ok...most of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a lil due the stretchness...u had some tight metas...wordplay was also pretty tight...some of ur punches connected...no personals...

SpitaFlame
stop spacing ur bars man...structure was pretty good...flow was also pretty nice...no metas...attempted wordplay, but most of it was pretty weak...maybe a few of ur punches connected at most....no personals...

Overall
neither had personals...spitaflame had the better structure...as well as the better flow...hoops had more, and better metas...as well as better wordplay...his punches also connected more...so basing off of that...hoops gets my vote...

VOTE - HOOPS

Please return the favor on one of the links in my sig

uppin for more votes ya'll........................





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hoops was hittin hard but it the flow lost me couple of times but vocag and metas was real good......

spita flame came wit it too...with waht he lacked in meats he made up for in flow...but it was real general....

both didnt make it personal so the battles wasn't inetense...


i vote for....................spita flame

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BOSTON LYRICIST

This was a close battle cuz both of ya'll was lame. I read Hoop's verse first then while i was readin Spitz verse i was thinkin to myself that hoops had won this. Cuz hoops had a little bit of a better verse. But that last line Spitz dropped took tha cake for him.
Keep elevatin. Vote - Spitaflame

Return tha favor. Link in my sig.

This battle wasnt that intense..i am a nigga that look for personals..and hoops had more..overall breakdown: Hoops you had a better flo and ur wordplay was preety good but a little long..good multis..Spitaflame..you lacked flo and personals..i'll tell you ..that you need some elevatin but you kept ur rhymes right to the point which i liked..

Hoops my vote goes to you but dont explain ya punchlines..it shows weakness

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