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no essays
no d/r, h, c

-you drop first like you said...

you get an hour after check

DQ.. nearly word for word line from eminem cd:
I'ma RUN your brain around da block to JOG your fuckin memory

check n shit

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check, waiting on your verse

I'ma spit this shit raw, u guaranteed to fuckin remember me/
If ya don't, I'ma RUN your brain around da block to JOG your fuckin memory/
Add a loss to your record book, make your status kinda uneven/
U a GULLIBLE BITCH so is it aight if i start callin u "Miss Believin"?/
Your initials read "VA", but u aint from Virginia or D.C./
When u rhyme shit about me, u like Green Bay cuz u are cheesy/
U lack lyrical content, like your avatar and profile, your style's empty/
When we listen to u rap, we searchin for skills but da shit is missing/
I'ma burn your style up, yo I'll FRY it like an order from McDonald's/
I'm fresh and clean, your shit is shitty and dirty like a hick's tonsels/
I'll be Michael Johnson plus a fuckin cheatah in this lyrical triathlon/
Your shit is just "Alrighty then" like Jim Carrey wit a MASK on/

...word...

hit dis up wit some votes bitches

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opener:

you spit your game, came plain and now votes wait arranged...
...wanted fame so heavily you bust a vein, even your sigs ashamed.

riots no emcee not to offend you,
just pretend to be a venue like gatorade...
...but, is it in you?

lets continue, if rap was money id donate what you lack...
...my text murder your front to back, its nuthin but a fact.
shut your trap, im over this battle, 5 votes and im out...
...shoot spokes in your mouth, so your grill like crunk folk from the south.

thats the only way you passin as fully Lyric...
...2nd line was murder, shoot caps in your cascet and your a Holy spirit.
slip on brass knuckles cuz your punches alone dont buckle...
...2 bars would be too suddle, my punches: you couldnt duck fool.

closure:

its my former-town-where quater-pounders like yourself aproach~the~best...
...a shorter-crowd-for the normal-sound-where my lyrics elope~your~chest.

as Bill~would~taunt:your mine to fill~with~haunt...
...you cant escape the fear when your pill~is~shot, dude you just got killed~with~font

uppin for votes in this muthafucka

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uppin uno

uppin dos

uppin for some votes

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Battle was pretty hard to judge on.

MC Riot: Pretty nice flow...a couple lines were off a few syllables but it really didnt skip a beat thru your verse. I noticed right off the bat that you used a whole lot of metas...and you tied a lot of them in with personal punches. Creativity was what your verse was all about. No multies from you...which would helped your flow even more...but over a good verse...nice hard punches...and nice metas also.

Whos next?

VA: I havent seen a style like yours before, it was a lil different in parts. Some of your bars were long and some were short...it wasnt really that bad, it was just confusing to read at first. The gatorade line was pretty nice I liked that. Nothing really along the lines of personals from you though...that hurt your punches some. I didnt think your punches were as hard as his...seeing also that he had more than you. Some nice multies to open your verse up though...not really a good opener though. Just a lil harder next time...some personals and you got it.

v/MC Riot

Please return the fav in my sig below.

uppin shit

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uppin and shiat

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uppin

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Okay
Flow: mCriot
Personals:VA
Style: VA
Opener: Va
Metas: mCriot

Winner: VA...

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