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Sum shit i wrote...
IP: 1FB9 C69A
ok peep this, tell me wot u think. thanks.
Unrequited love, it’s burning up my soul Feeling empty, like pockets on the dole I’m, like a galaxy sucked into a black hole Life seems pointless, like a broken pencil Acting nasty cuz this period is tensile Clenched fists, don’t ask me why im stressed It’s like im in debt, im feeling possessed Aint in the 30’s but I still feel depressed Dressed in ice, on the inside im frozen Like Jesus’ brothers, the ones that weren’t chosen Fuck it, now y’all witnessing the sobering Take you to the next level guess im an elevator I’ll grind a motherfucker just like I was a skater Fossilise you, your body needs a carbon dater This is it, the re-birth I’ve bin waiting The new me, see im constantly updating Rhymes so deep they need annotating I’m living now fuck having a regret This biro’s my pet relieve stress like a cigarette Causing more chaos than a fake terrorist threat U bet against me I’ll send u into debt I’d be a sex symbol but I aint blond or brunette My shit puts u in the shadows like a fucking silhouette There two sides to me I’m sorta like the moon Start wars like I was an oil tycoon I hate these dude who fake like a cartoon Wack rappers get busted like balloons With they over-inflated ego’s Forget cannabis, my rhymes higher than eagles My music is mega, I’m keeping it legal But I wont hesitate to bust shots like beanie sigel When I spit, u keep coming back like a beagle |
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IP: 3240 794D
shit was hot....
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
its was ok........not the best but decent
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was nice i like ur structure but not ur potential but it'z str8 tho
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New to RB
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IP: 5EA8 688F
Oooooooooooooooooooo Lovely
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New to RB
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IP: 5EA8 688F
THAT SHIT WAS AITE NO DOUT,VERY CREATIVE WITH THE LINES....Feeling empty, like pockets on the dole
I’m, like a galaxy sucked into a black hole Life seems pointless, like a broken pencil Acting nasty cuz this period is tensile NOT BAD... |
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New to RV
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IP: 1FB9 C69A
thanks for the feedback guys. any suggestions wot to improve on for next time?
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was g'd up a lil bit i enjoyed it but keepin workin hard & u'll get 2 ur potential
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was good & u brought da pain but continue 2 work on ur flow
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Simply Dope
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IP: 4289 77F4
that was some pretty good shit dun
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