aiight

10-20 lines
no crew votes
no bullshit


u spit first, lemme see what u can do

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After you read my shit you gonna quit the game.
Like a dragon when I spit I spit flames.
Your rhymes generic like you bought em at Aldi''s.
My rhymes authentic like made by Vivaldi.
The rhymes that I spit are too complex.
Cuz I spit more than a chick w/ a gag reflex.
Better bow down to olkingkole and kiss my hand.
Cuz you can't hang like an innocent man.
I'm hardcore like Pam Anderson and Paris Hilton combined.
And my rhymes is leakproof like a pantyline.

listen king cole, i read ya shit n im still here
quit the game? u must be insane, ya words are queer
too much 40 oz beer, thats why u think ya king
your whole verse is wak, i think rappin just aint ya thing
u sayin that your a dragon.. no wonder.. there not real
kinda like ya ego, u more like old moldy veal
you know what, you right, you do have gag reflex
u found that out by suckin dicks, with the male hoes u pay for sex
ill give u a chin checkin, u gave less then i was expectin
now u fucked up kid, u got AK disrespectin... you.. and ya weak style
get off this board child, go back to pre-school
where its safe to act a fool
man i would never back down to a clown like king cole
even hes gonna vote i win, that nigga'll do what hes told
fuck this battle, king cole im out son
and ill send u a recordin of the battle i just won


aiight lets get some votes rollin.

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Okay he's had enough. Now vote for the best, people.

is it just me or did this mc tell people to not vote for him??

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uppin

need some votes people................

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olkingkole
structure is pretty good...flow is good for the most part...no metas...wordplay is pretty tight...a few of ur punches connected...no personals...

MC AK
structure is also pretty good...flow is good...u had a few metas...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no personals...

Overall
olkingkole had better wordplay...both had a pretty good structure, as well as a pretty good flow...neither had personals...mc ak had more metas...mc ak also had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...mc ak gets my vote...

VOTE - MC AK

[i]PLEASE return the favor on one of the links in my sig...thanx man...[/b]

wasnt my best shit ill admit
thanx for the vote man

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no prob...

...but could u please return the favor with an honest vote man...

my battles r gettin slept on like their is no tomorrow...

King Kole yo verse wa iight. A couple of decent punches. But ya still could stand to elevate a little bit. MC yo verse was better but not much better. It was flowin good till bout halfway throught. Ya structure started to break and some rhymes got skipped so i got a lil lost. But i'm goin wit MC cuz his overall lyrics was better.
Vote - MC AK

What the fuck is this shit? His rhymes were fucking horrible. I had several metaphors dumbasses. My rhyme had ten times better flow than his. Yoou guys are fucking retarded.

After you read my shit you gonna quit the game.
Like a dragon when I spit I spit flames.
Your rhymes generic like you bought em at Aldi''s.
My rhymes authentic like made by Vivaldi.
The rhymes that I spit are too complex.
Cuz I spit more than a chick w/ a gag reflex.
Better bow down to olkingkole and kiss my hand.
Cuz you can't hang like an innocent man.
I'm hardcore like Pam Anderson and Paris Hilton combined.
And my rhymes is leakproof like a pantyline.

(Weakest shit i ever heard. plus is you a girl cause what with the last line?)

Mc ak it was hot keep doing it but your was kinda simple too
vote mcak

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olkingkole... dude, ya gotta use punches, all you did was brag about yaself. whatchu expect to accomplish doin that shit? PUNCHES, yo, Punches win battles, thas why AK merked you, 'cause even though his were simple, he still used em.

AK, good shit, ya jus need to make it more complex when ya flip his verse back on him, 'cause all ya really did was re-state what he said, and then replied to it.

Vote: MC AK

Peace

BTW: please vote on: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131693

This is the last post I'ma put on here.
Cuz apparently I drink too much 40 oz beer.
If you think you rappin on here to gain fame
You have to realize that this shit is lame.
You rap Stephen Sondheim in ancient decorum
"A funny thing happened on the way to the forum.
I heard real emcees rappin in front of people
Their shit was on point like a cathedral steeple,
And here's the weird part they made it on the spot
They didn't have time to delete their shit and then re-plot."
Fuck all you bitches tryin to make it to riches
Cuz the shit you try to write leaves me in stitches.
I got better flow than a menstrating hoe
And its my time to shine like mop 'n' glow