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-NERVEZ- | 1 | 16.67% | |
TheOne | 5 | 83.33% | |
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06-17-04, 09:44 PM | #1 | |
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TheOne vs. -NERVEZ-
IP: 4B62 FF39
aight, 10 linez
due TONIGHT!!!! No krew or hate votez no bitin!! aight? peace out man(\1/)
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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha |
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06-17-04, 09:52 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 4B62 FF39
aight man
Aight yo look u lil noob that tryin to fuk wid TheOne Thiz iz ur first battle, an first lesson, listen up son U fukin wid me, ur messin wid fire an i fire burnz U lil fuk, i feel sorry fo u, i guess ur the guy who learnz To mess wid a nigga like thiz, 3-6 an just gettin started An the worst part iz, I'm a machine thatz been de-hearted He kallz himself nervez, kuz hez the man who swervez On the road as hez goin round cornaz, an right here'z some curvez I'm one an u just lost, ova the kliff an down the mountain, no chance of survival Fuk i messed u up so bad, therz no chance of healin, close casket funeral, no revival
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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha |
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06-17-04, 10:55 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 12CA C5E8
IM about to piss on the brook, aint yo momma tell you not to listen to crooks
cut off your legs and your next song be about missing a foot,torch your face, put the fire out with forks bearing hooks.Blaring raps on contact yo fukin lungs collapse. If u the one then why da fuk u comin in last?Shistee how NERVEZ Gets shit so hiffee,leave u at the bottom of da bay sightseeing So u Hard?punk ass probably was raised in a barn,suckin off sheep like he Babe of da farm Bitches like u treat the mic like a dick and try to blowit so i get on yo fukin knees an make you smile like a donut You fake ,and immitation so back da fuk down/ aint rappin about money boy get yo head out da clouds |
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06-17-04, 10:57 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 3D96 E4B6
i'll be back.............................................. .
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06-18-04, 12:19 AM | #5 | |
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vote
IP: 12CA C5E8
can yall cats vote on who yall think came mo sicc wid it.waitin on da vote$ im still new 2 dis site ESO
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06-18-04, 07:42 AM | #6 | |
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IP: F6A1 F1CC
eh yo dawgz, wuz up? hit up thiz battle an leave HONEST FEEDBAK
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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha |
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06-18-04, 07:46 AM | #7 | |
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IP: 6D4A 2998
i cant vote yet but ill provide feedback. One came strong with decent punches. his structure was really good, flow was decent but it lacked mutlis. nerves used played swing-and-miss cliche punches. his structure was piss-poor, and because it was poorly layed out it ruined his flow and made it hard to read. nerves, you really got to work on personals, rather then the overused "ima kill you bitch/yo momma!" type crap
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06-18-04, 07:49 AM | #8 | |
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IP: F6A1 F1CC
aight than xIll, i appreciate the feedbak man
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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha |
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06-18-04, 03:01 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 8CE8 43C6
not a good battle.......one ur elevatin ur shit alot better than when i first got at ya, big ups meng. keep doin ur thang, and try throw in some good multies.....nerves shit was too basic all been heard and said before go beyond the basics, and youll be alright, aight vote goes to theone
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06-18-04, 03:02 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 8CE8 43C6
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06-18-04, 03:25 PM | #11 | |
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IP: F6A1 F1CC
thanx HB thanx fo the feedbak an i'll hit up ur battle
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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha |
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06-18-04, 11:51 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 12CA C5E8
damn thats coo no love. i was high off that purple i thought it was coo
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06-19-04, 07:09 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 7C15 C1EB
thaone gotz this battle, tha other man, he seemed like he just freestyled that shit, didnt care about adding good punchlines, and thaones read alot better. Seemd like i got lost in Nerves words, peace.
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06-19-04, 07:19 PM | #14 | |
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IP: A040 26B5
aight yo letz get sum votez on thiz battle i no i wun kuz every1 getz lost in his writin so letz get sum votez
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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha |
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06-22-04, 04:40 AM | #15 | |
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IP: 12CA C5E8
need sum votes............................................. .....
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