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Old 07-05-04, 09:37 PM   #1
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
B.X.P vs Ms. Versatyle

IP: BC3C CB42

10 lines
house rules
you spit first
 
Old 07-05-04, 09:56 PM   #2
Ms. Versatyle
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From: Mid-Town G
IP: 44BC 9066

aight:

u gon B in Xcrutiatin Pain, i'll make u turn insane/
bitch, wuts my name?, take this delinger 'n' blow out ur brains/
ur flo is bought out of a small dolla sto', cut u up real slow/
my flo which iz shown 2 hav mo style than a sean john fashion show/
i spit on u, u cant battle meeh, ya see/
i'll leave u hangin like wut m.j. did 2 his baby/
fuk this, u lil bitch cant test this/
u lumpy 'n' disordered like ruben studderd's tits/
tryin 2 rap on this shit, u betta of on ur mom's clit/
best git this thng rite, son or u'll git hit/
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Old 07-05-04, 10:20 PM   #3
B.X.P
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IP: BC3C CB42

This girls having a bitch fit lines are stretched like a mile
Somebody stop her before her VERSE goes outta sTYLE
Whack emcees comin outta the sky like its been raining
Put Rope around your neck and i literally left you hanging
Pregnant and Trying to get to the hospital in a push cart
Like after a pregnacy your lines were left with stretched marks
I dont know if you got beef or just takin your pms on me
What the fuck im sayin shes 14 shes hasnt gone their puberty
Tobacco and Smokin habits these days are a big concern
Like the cigarrete brand "CAMEL" You was a " PLEASURE TO BURN"
 
Old 07-05-04, 11:34 PM   #4
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
IP: BC3C CB42

uppin dont sleep on this battle
and there are spots open for Triple D..........
 
Old 07-06-04, 01:38 AM   #5
WillNova
Middle Weight
 
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From: New Haven, CT
IP: 9409 16AF

damn, good ass battle... B.X.P ripped it, had good punches and bars... Versatyle was nice wit the michael jackson and rubben studdard bar, but B.X.P. had strong rebuttals and his whole flow was jus betta alltogether

winner..... B.X.P
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Old 07-06-04, 02:08 AM   #6
Durmil
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From: Wastalands
IP: B90F 540D

punches-BXP
personals-BXP
flow and structure-BXP
multi's-Ms.
Overall-BXP....stronger punches a better flow and won in personals...

good battle....plz drop an HONEST vote in this battle of mine...its only fair...peace
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132945
 
Old 07-06-04, 09:41 AM   #7
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
IP: BC3C CB42

uppin
ill return the favor drop links
dont sleep on this
 
Old 07-06-04, 09:47 AM   #8
verbal violence
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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b.x droped it hot punches flow vocab wasnt that great structure was koo sides that it was aight

ms. vers wasnt felin ya that much i mean u had punches but they didnt land like b.x's
si ima give this one 2 b.x
v/b.x

return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133475
 
Old 07-06-04, 12:11 PM   #9
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
IP: BC3C CB42

uppin dont sleep on this
i always return the favor just drop links
 
Old 07-06-04, 02:44 PM   #10
QBsmasher
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D

Yeah this was a pretty easy call.
flow:BXP
structure:BXP
personals:BXP
punches:BXP
open:BXP
close:BXP
metas:tie

Ms. Versatyle, you need to work on your structure. A better structure makes your flow sound better, and its easier to read. You were throwing punches, you just need to elevate them a bit and make em hit harder. Try some personals also, those are usually the hardest hitting punches. A little better on the vocab, so that you dont rhyme with such simple words would help also.

v/BXP

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133225
 
Old 07-06-04, 05:45 PM   #11
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
IP: 0F8A 7B91

uppin dont sleep on this drop links and ill return the favor
 
Old 07-06-04, 07:18 PM   #12
RapMisstress
Flyweight
 
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From: LOS ANGELES
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Lmao......ahh Shit This Was Ova. B.x.p No Doubt From The Punches To The Structure.etc... B.x.p Verse Was Very Easy To Follow And The Punches Had Me Laughin.
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Old 07-06-04, 07:26 PM   #13
BZ No Mercy
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Flow:BXP
Structure:BXP
Personals:BXP
Punches:BXP
Open:BXP
Close:BXP
Metas:BXP
Winner by TKO- B.X.P.

check mine out- http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133615
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