10-12 lines
you spit first
no time limit
no crew,d/r, and hatin votes

go u spit dawg and g'luck ya'll need it

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A crip just like Bonecollector

i'll start with ya crew...
which includes you so ya whole group say ya prayers
cause i've seen more hardwood classickz from 70's basketball players
fuck handlin with care..i'll impair ya vision and fix it absurd
even you predicted the focus in this battle...when ya did ya name blurred
though ya runnin w/ a herd...intimidation wont phase this guy
cause if ya skill was worth money....youd' be worth LESS to buy
cry wolf...bitch...this beast is killin ya record with pride
and as i feed off ya L...i'm swallowin a W in side
^ yes it was wack but fuck ya needed some kinda hold
cause just like you bein a lethal vet....ya rhymes are deathly old

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VOTE ON THESE BATTLES:

Tourn vs Kronuz
Tourn vs Femcee
Tourn Vs DJulien

Torn this bitch apart and like a sacrifice blood falls on the Alter *
On top of that the Presence of you bothers me like if you was a stalker *
Urine in trouble I don't know wat you did but it seemed like you pissed ***
Ratify that this is like a punch-line battle 1 by 1 all your hits would miss
Nothin is wat you actually are, and I took this battle just way to far
Anthrax just a sniff and then you’ll know wat is to die and fall so hard
Balls are “hit from you than more balls hit in the children’s playground”
I shot this bitch wit only three bullets and made him stay-laid-down
The color red is the color of your blood which I made you shed ****
Canine bitch is wat you are and wit a k-and-a-nine you started to bled *****
He quotes himself cuz wen he sleeps he would be closer to death ******
1ne this bitch is done and I didnt have to try he just lost his breath

* Alter= part of his crew name
** Presence= part of his crew name
*** Urine= ur in......pissed= mad
**** red= alt-(er)---that part in his sig is red
***** K-and-a-nine(canine)= two types of gun
****** the quote by nas is in his sig

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A crip just like Bonecollector

Damnnn i think Lethal lunatic took this battle. lethal had batter punches,multis and metas. i was feelin his spit and i liked it alot.

Punches: lethal
Metas:Lethal
Multis:Lethal
Structure:Tie
Flow:Lethal

Vote: Lethal lunatic

aight this is how this goes... lethal took this shit in a lot of categorys... first off the "TOURN A BITCH" thing in bold was pretty tight, i liked that man... you came pretty hard with punches and personals and we all know thats what wins battles right there dawg... i also liked your structure and rhyme scheme a lot more... Tourn i aint hatin because you came pretty hard to brotha but this wasnt your battle hommie, sorry bro... this one goes to lethal....

VOTE-LETHAL

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16 KOs 19 WINS

my vote goes to Tourn,

Both did there thing in this one but I realy wasnt feeling lethals punches. Tourn did a nice personal about lethals name being blured while Lethal used played out concept like the name spelling verse and the "Torn this bitch..." lines. Ur verse was tight but U stook to obviouse punches. Thats wat I mean by played. Plus the Urine thing was actually childish, U lost points on metaphores for that one.

Flow, L
Struct, L
Punches, T
Personals, T
Metaphores, T
Overall, both did good but I think T had the upper hand.

V/ Tourn

Ps. Hit up my sig and vote in one of my battles honestly. We'll vote in one of ur battles honestly too if we see U vote.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

^^^agrees 100%^^^^

I know I cant vote but Im still gonna voice my opinion...

tourn - pretty good structure/flow...a couple good punches...one being the name being blurred...still lacking that one hard hard punch...and maybe a better finisher...

LL- thought was good...I like the idea that you had...just some of it didnt make sense...or seemed like a little kid was writin it...flow was good same with structure...but you didnt have that great of punches...just dont think you came as nice as tourn...

if I could vote...vote-Tourn

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ALTERED PRESENCE
Will E. Maze
NWB(my group)
SleepLess Poets(my internet group)

aiight ima have ta go wit Doulble LL, he had good multis n punches n gud flow tourn u was aiight n nyce but i have to give it ta LL

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yo fag u say that cuz you in his crew and yea Im 12 and I beat ya leader whose like 18

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A crip just like Bonecollector

tourn, you got potential but you didn't come as hard as you could've you had decent punches and nice flow but it didnt match up wit LL. LL i like the message you put in your bars and the punches was on point, my vote goes to LL.

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Opener- LL
closer- LL
Multies- LL
Punches - T
Wordplay- T
Structure- LL
Most Enjoyed- LL
Flow- T

Vote - LL he covered most of it...

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