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*Looks at com and cant believe its like round 6 or something*

Ok 1st battle since gettin back and what better battle to warm up them cells than to merk m.c anti-rhymer ha ha here we go lets get it crackin...

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This guys a ho i could get more challenge playin a 2 year old at Chess/
U need a boob job noob u a man and to sustain wins...u'll need breasts/*
You dont win much that aint good u got zero improvment/
All i keep seeing on ur loss record is constant movement/
The sunset on ur shine hold on in your case it was always night time/
It was like you were destined to try but couldnt rhyme so u gave up n died/
Fact is bitch i now know the true meaning of ur name i know about you/
Truth is ur claustaphobic thats why u called outsider u hate close spaces dont u/
Well when this is closed it wont be too close so you wont have to sweat in fear/
U'll jus have to gasp for air coz i got my grip on you and 6-0 is all u hear/**

*Breasts = to distract the opponent by flashing them
** 6-0 amount of times i should've beat him

Waitin on you now outsider c'mon what you got

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im rippin this bitch already, stand back as I put the kay nine down/
fuckin rip ya spine... jab it up ur mums clit and twist and make her howl/
you can't even touch me I’m too much for ya ass, you'll never get past/
face it, all u are is trash, i'll kik ur ass in a flash burn u like ur guy falks/
all you do is talk, i'll draw my name on ur face in charcoal chalk/
to point my thoughts da der bigger den urs, and make u never walk/
all you do is masterbate, i'll blast you like a bombs just deternated/
your always gonna be da sucker, wid no luck, and u've deteriated/
all dis shit about n site, ur just jelous of him cuz ur shit and white/
i fuck you up in spite, torch da mad dog wid rabies, and watch u die!/

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ehhh i'll give this to mad dog he had a lil more interesting verse

openor: Mad Dog
Strcuture: outsider
flow: Both
personals: Mad dog
Punches: mad dog
Enjoyed both
Closer: Tied
Vote : mad dog

return the favor in one of my battles the link is in my sig

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Truth is ur claustaphobic thats why u called outsider u hate close spaces dont u/
Well when this is closed it wont be too close so you wont have to sweat in fear/

These lines were dope! Loved them...


all dis shit about n site, ur just jelous of him cuz ur shit and white/
i fuck you up in spite, torch da mad dog wid rabies, and watch u die!/
Nice closer from outsider

openor: Mad Dog
Strcuture: outsider
flow: Both
personals: Mad dog
Punches: outsider
Closer: outsider

Vote : outsider, was close and very nice battle...keep it up!!!

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Im gonna have top say...Mad...dog won this battle ebcause i think his flow was overall better....i think outsider ur struc...and punches were good...ya need to work on more complex wordplay....for maddog ...i think his wordplay was ok......his struc was ok.....his punches were good...iight no beef ..or hate vote...iight vote on my and metah....

Vote---Maddog

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Vote=Outsider

His verse was overall better.Mad Dog stuff wasn't making to much sense to me.His verse just wasn't as good as Outsider to me.

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Mad dog- i dont konw what people were saying...you had no punches
when you came out with punches in the first part of your verse

You dont win much that aint good u got zero improvment/
All i keep seeing on ur loss record is constant movement/
^^that was funny
you had some nice punches and personals good flow struc was off but
your flow made up for that...

Outsider- in my mind you had some played and basic punches

all dis shit about n site, ur just jelous of him cuz ur shit and white/
i fuck you up in spite, torch da mad dog wid rabies, and watch u die!/
^^that was a weak closer
you didnt have good wordplay..you did have some multis and an ok flow
work on your punches and personals more...work with that..it will help

you didnt have great punches..these newbs are lying..but maybe its cuz
they have never seen one

Vote-Mad Dog

Mad Dog - IIght verse. Had a couple of punches. Good thang you explained those two lines cuz at first i didn't understand em. Lyrically you did ya job. Only thing i didn't like was that you spit some bars in one line and others in two.

Outsider - Mad dog got you cuz some of ya lyrics wasn't really rhymin. Tha was a lil bit but you were pushin it. Decent vocab even though you spelled tha words wrong.
Vote - Mad dog.

UPPIN this MA fuckin THREAD one MORE time FOR the WIN

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yea..mad dog got this... it was pretty much one sided, when i read that clit line.......come on outsider, just work a lil bit harder, and youll come up with some better punches... mad dog took this easily wit punches...


punches:mad
complexity:mad
flowutsider(was to simple tho)(mad ur lines were a bit stretched in my opinion)


v/mad dog

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Thanks for the removal of them freeposts UPPIN THIS YET AGAIN

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