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10 - 15 lines
no hate d/r or crew votes
spitt due half hour afta check in

gud luk homie

yo ima leave this dude shook wit a stupid look,
you a bitch in everybodys rhyme book,
so dont deny it and try to be defyant,
cause your lyrics are wack and not very relyant,
so this about this next line and what ima bout to say,
your worse than a fag you just a wannabe gay,
so come out of your hiding place and face this music,
im givin you permission to bite go ahead and use it,
i should get arrested for this shit im too abusive,
you wack at this shit get used to loosin,
you cant get a vote you need to get stiched up cause im lyricly brousin.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

yo an error!!!!!!!!!!

5th line i ment to say
"so think about this next line and what im about to say"

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

When I flow its like I designed rap n made a new invention
All this man does is rap like he stuck in his own dimension

305 posts n he aint won a battle? He just a try hard
get a life man u 19 u degenerated retard

solja I read ur life thru ur profile I can tell ur personality
ur game is weak u need ta get a grip on reality

only time u find this fool flowing is after a late night vindaloo
all his shit doesn’t make sence his mouth cant even get off tha loo (toilet)

U kill ur self wit ur flow n trap ur self wid ur bars like u in jail
Now am a realease u frum the game man like u out on bail

Lyriclesolja I picked u fo a easy win n I aint gon get surprised
Ur flows r like ur dick……..circumcised.

am a end this shit now with out a second mention
i bet this kids realy about 13 n stuck in detention......

time fo yall ta drop a vote on this battle..

we took the time ta spitt now yall take the time ta vote......thanx yall

Lyriclesolja
structure was good...flow was good for the most part...no metas...no good wordplay...maybe 1 of ur punches connected...no good personals...

BrOtHa-HoOd
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off a lil cause of the stretchness...a few metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Lyriclesolja had the better structure as well as the more stable flow...neither had good personals...BrOtHa-HoOd had more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...BrOtHa-HoOd gets my vote...

VOTE - BROTHA-HOOD

BrOtHa-HoOd, please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...lyricle cant vote as it is against him, so please vote holmes...

thanx fo a honest vote man i appreciate it n i hope i learn.....every1 gotta elevate

punches-brotha
personals-brotha
structure-tie
opener-brotha
closer-brotha
vote-brothahood

drop an honest vote on this battle of mine plz....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132945

uppin this shit cos i think its been 3 hours n we need votes on out battle

aight thanx.................

lyricalsolja
yo ima leave this dude shook wit a stupid look,
you a bitch in everybodys rhyme book,
this is kinda bit. 1/10
so dont deny it and try to be defyant,
cause your lyrics are wack and not very relyant,
bad multi's. 2/10
so this about this next line and what ima bout to say,
your worse than a fag you just a wannabe gay,
actually a wannabee's better than a fag. 1/10
so come out of your hiding place and face this music,
im givin you permission to bite go ahead and use it,
Bite your's lmao. 2/10
i should get arrested for this shit im too abusive,
you wack at this shit get used to loosin,
you cant get a vote you need to get stiched up cause im lyricly brousin.
Ok closer for you. 3/10
Not feelin this at all. Too basic. Be more creative. Use punches an personals. No hate. Just tryna help.
7/50

Brotha-Hood
When I flow its like I designed rap n made a new invention
All this man does is rap like he stuck in his own dimension
Ok. Kinda. but u talk bout urself. 3/10
305 posts n he aint won a battle? He just a try hard
get a life man u 19 u degenerated retard
think u meant degenerate. pretty funny. 4/10
solja I read ur life thru ur profile I can tell ur personality
ur game is weak u need ta get a grip on reality
Weak personal 3/10
only time u find this fool flowing is after a late night vindaloo
all his shit doesn’t make sence his mouth cant even get off tha loo (toilet)
Blah. 3/10
U kill ur self wit ur flow n trap ur self wid ur bars like u in jail
Now am a realease u frum the game man like u out on bail
Nah. played. 1/10
Lyriclesolja I picked u fo a easy win n I aint gon get surprised
Ur flows r like ur dick……..circumcised.
this was ok. but played. 2/10
am a end this shit now with out a second mention
i bet this kids realy about 13 n stuck in detention......
weak ass punch/closer 2/10
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You weren't Horrible. But you need alot of improvement. Just try an use a higher vocab in your verse. Also be more creative, I seen alot of played lines in your verse. You won this one i think tho. Good Job.
18/60

Vote/BrothaHood

Hit up My battle's my sig wit honest votes. Thanks.

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thanx fo the vote n thanx even mo fo the honest comment man, it aint no secret that i need ta elevate but am tryin homie

time fo ppl to stop sleepin , n time fo ppl ta start voting !

c'mon i voted on plenty of battle n i left a link for ppl 2 vote now i aint voting on n e mor battles, drop a vote n leave a link for me 2 n lyriclesolja ta vote on

-Lyriclesolja.
yo ima leave this dude shook wit a stupid look,
you a bitch in everybodys rhyme book,
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss
so dont deny it and try to be defyant,
cause your lyrics are wack and not very relyant,
doesn't flow, no worplay, weak diss
o this about this next line and what ima bout to say,
your worse than a fag you just a wannabe gay,
coo flow, no wordplay, weak punch
so come out of your hiding place and face this music,
im givin you permission to bite go ahead and use it,
i should get arrested for this shit im too abusive,
aight flow, aight wordplay, played out punch
you wack at this shit get used to loosin,
you cant get a vote you need to get stiched up cause im lyricly brousin.
average flow, weak wordplay, weak diss


-Brothahood.
When I flow its like I designed rap n made a new invention
All this man does is rap like he stuck in his own dimension
average flow, coo wordplay, not really a diss/punch
305 posts n he aint won a battle? He just a try hard
get a life man u 19 u degenerated retard
average flow, no wordplay, aight diss
solja I read ur life thru ur profile I can tell ur personality
ur game is weak u need ta get a grip on reality
doesn't flow, no wordplay, weak diss
only time u find this fool flowing is after a late night vindaloo
all his shit doesn’t make sence his mouth cant even get off tha loo (toilet)
aight flow, aight wordplay, aight punch
U kill ur self wit ur flow n trap ur self wid ur bars like u in jail
Now am a realease u frum the game man like u out on bail
average flow, coo wordplay, straight punch
Lyriclesolja I picked u fo a easy win n I aint gon get surprised
Ur flows r like ur dick……..circumcised.
average flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
am a end this shit now with out a second mention
i bet this kids realy about 13 n stuck in detention......
average flow, no wordplay, weak diss


Overall, Brotha got this. He had punches and wordplay some/most of the time. Brotha, work on your creativity and wording. That's your main faults. Lyricle, work on forming punches, using wordplay, creativity, and wordplay.


Vote - Brothahood.