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Mixtape 5 83.33%
Ilmatic D 1 16.67%
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Old 07-13-04, 04:59 PM   #1
Ilmatic D
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Ilmatic D vs Mixtape

IP: ADF9 F4E9

10-20lines..
Due an 30min
No hate
No D/R
No Crew

Good Luck
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Old 07-13-04, 05:01 PM   #2
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checkin in
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Old 07-13-04, 05:04 PM   #3
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Old 07-13-04, 05:17 PM   #4
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My rhymes are ill, and i’m packed with an automatic
Some say I got skill, most say that you’re erratic
I got subliminal words that’ll make ya head crazy
And stop smoking herbs, it’ll leave you physicly hazy
Common and try to rage me, I’ll punch yo head mainly
So you can’t even phase me, don’t think about a baby
Shit I would’a thought you was a Paedophile
But I was lookin, and I saw it after a while
U don’t eat allot of meat, and I’m one step away from scrying*
It’s food that ur body needs, on the next step,anorexia got u dyin
And I’m not even tryin, but my punchlines make you flyin
And I’ve seen it, you’re spyin, don’t do it again, or you’ll be fryin
Cuz on this battle I’m the aftermath*, I’ma influence ya style
Cuz ya scared to rap, and in the end, I’m the one to grind



*Scrying: To see or predict the future by means of a crystal ball.
* Aftermath: the consequences of an event
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Old 07-13-04, 05:19 PM   #5
Wicked One
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Me copyin 8 Mile? Bitch even you emerged from that movement…
Tryin' to rock the mic,better stick to Alternative Music...
I'm hurtin ya unit, You should've know this niggas reckless...
And quick to rock you like Ushers necklace...
I made you grab my balls for 4 quarters,And if you run under pressure...
I'll dump 50 quicker than Columbia Records...
I'm lovin the weather but my mic tones harmful...
That's why when I speak the skies grow darker,Puttin you carrer on the line like tight rope walkers...
Do you want more? "No" should be your only answer...
You don't want me to show you "Whos The Boss" like Tony Danza...
Fuck it I'll do his chick dirty and dip early cause I'm winning this battle hands down like 6:30...
Talkin about machetes and shit,Bitch you're not one to harm...
Last time you touched a blade was to shave your underarms...
You love my charm but I gotta put and end to this Joke like punchlines...
Leave you amazed at all the syllables formed during this lyical...
Cause I keep kids hooked like Umbilical Cords...
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Old 07-13-04, 05:37 PM   #6
Paris Hilton666
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Structure: tie
Flow: tie
Punches: Mix
Personals: Mix
Enjoyed: BOth

D- 5/10

Mix- 7/10

vote: mix
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Old 07-13-04, 06:05 PM   #7
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upin votes
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Old 07-13-04, 06:06 PM   #8
Ca'lam
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i gotta say.. enjoyment wise, mixtape killed it.. he nasty with the metaphores.. hands down like 6:30 lol...

Punches:tied..neither really was going at the throat..
personals:neither really
metas:definatly mixtape... had some sick ones int here..
flowef mixtape

i feel mixtapes verse had a harder effect..

v/Mix

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Old 07-13-04, 06:21 PM   #9
Yvonne
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punches : both
structure : ilmatic D
rhymes: ilmatic D....cos the other dude dodnt make good rymes at all...
overall:enjoyed ilmatics D's cos his shit was more interesting

v:ilmatic D
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Old 07-13-04, 07:23 PM   #10
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upin more votes please
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Old 07-13-04, 09:33 PM   #11
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Old 07-13-04, 10:00 PM   #12
tourn
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gotta give it to mixtape....he came above par on punches.....vocab wasn't that great...and that closer was alittle to long but still a decent line...

illmatic...some mediorce stuff homie....yoru punches didn't really hit and your verse was mostly played stuff...didn't really introduce any new concepts....

v-mixtape

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Old 07-13-04, 10:31 PM   #13
fluidmoon
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let me break it down ...
ilmatic: your verse was good man but it seemed like you were trying to rhyme, i dont know, but your punches were decent, but kinda simple lines
mixtape:you had an overall good verse here, personal punches were tight, wordplay was good,you came hard in your opener and you just stayed with the flow all thru..

VOTE:Mixtape
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Old 07-13-04, 10:31 PM   #14
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Vote MixTape--- here's why

And stop smoking herbs, it’ll leave you physicly hazy
Common and try to rage me, I’ll punch yo head mainly
So you can’t even phase me, don’t think about a baby- 3 lines of very basic rhymes- you didn't come with any hard punches, metas, wordplay or anything expected in a text battle----1


Me copyin 8 Mile? Bitch even you emerged from that movement…
Tryin' to rock the mic,better stick to Alternative Music -- this was a good opener from mixtape, you had some nice bars, some stretched a little, and I wasn't really feelin the Tony Danza line cuz It's an older concept and the punch was never that strong in the context you used here--- but you did come alot harder than your opponent, you had everything expected in a text battle here--- 1

drop an honest explained one here.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133452
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