Battle Rules:

4 lines
no crew/hate votes
no dickriding
no biting/recycling
no feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-29-04 at 03:21 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 03:22 AM.

Kizza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 10:35 AM.

fuck this I don't need 2 days to make a drop. here's hoping you dont either..


yo sis give me nice brain off in stairways
surfin' on plane only way you hit the 'airwaves'
I'm supposed to battle a grimy rhymin mime?
he ain't 'communicate' proper poetic designs


good luck to mimesis

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B.A.M.

Breathless Arresting Mindscapes

Kizza

Shy

Ruff-tuff-thug

Raw Killa

Cruelintentionz

yo sis give me nice brain off in stairways
surfin' on plane only way you hit the 'airwaves'
I'm supposed to battle a grimy rhymin mime?
he ain't 'communicate' proper poetic designs

almost been 3 hours since my drop, what did you lock yourself in the can or something mimesis?

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B.A.M.

Breathless Arresting Mindscapes

Kizza

Shy

Ruff-tuff-thug

Raw Killa

Cruelintentionz

Kiz wants to battle me.....ill lyrically murder his ass....cause im not one to forgive
And now he wants to add a win?...Kizza cant even count how many years hes lived!*
Hes givin me the W.......so i set the stage......unleash my rage and rip ur page
But his occupation relates to his punches...
...cause both have been used for ages!**

*Under his profile, where it says 'Age' he has 'imm'...which is not a number.

**His occupation is 'timeless classics'...generally classics are older items...such as basketball jerseys from the greatest players of all time.

Bitch.

imm= immortal.......................
occupation= Making timeless classics. any literate could figure that.
technically you used 7 lines so you're over the limit.
Bitch.

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B.A.M.

Breathless Arresting Mindscapes

Kizza

Shy

Ruff-tuff-thug

Raw Killa

Cruelintentionz

No, I didnt.

its all one segment in the first bar...the second bar is like this...

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
bbbbbbbbbbbb...
...bbbbbbbbbbb

its 4 lines.

Bitch.

hahahahahahhahaha I vote for this dude hands down..........

reasons for my vote going this way:

punches: were hard-hitting than the others guys and we
all know that is the major factor in the battling system...

vocab: his words were more complex than the other......

personals: well he did have them and it explained it
with both his explanations there...........................

originality: was way better than the other because
you could understand it and even if it wasn't original
he would still win because the other battler's entire
concept of it was used over and over again.........

effect: it did well tied it all up and merked him with it...

vote: for battler 1

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Kizza guess what his lines were stretched and hes from rapbattles original
that is the structure there man....

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^ But it is 4 lines, not 7, like what he said.

But thanx for the vote.

Voted For: Mimesis

u had better lines...1st line was better but than the second was iight.......but the first line, was better than all of the other dudes verse...
so u get the vote...

p.s. see...this eliminates the use of personals...i wouldnt kno who u were talking about unless i could see his profile...and i apparently cant even see it..

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Voted For: Mimesis

Flow Was A Lil Off... Personals Was There And Punches Were Ok... Structure Was Off.... Overal 6/10 Verse...

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^ Thanx for the votes.

2-0 Me.

Uppin this ish.