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Bomber-Z |
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0 | 0% |
Lethal Lunatic |
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5 | 100.00% |
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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10-12 lines
you spit first after you check in each of us get 30 minutes g'luck ya'll need it |
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IP: 797E BEFD
checking in ill have my stuff in like 5-10 mins aite..
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Graphically Gifted
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IP: 797E BEFD
Aight check it…
Don’t try to be a Lloyd Banks wannabe/ You better “beg for mercy” so don’t even try to make a contaversy// You probably thought I couldn’t spit this hard/ U made the wrong move by choosing that card// Yes the card where u get killed by bomber-z / Uh huh yea ur getting killed me// This what ima do tie u up n throw in coffin/ Don’t try and mess wit me “I’m steady mobbin”// This is it rip Lethal Lunatic/ Ur not Lethal at all come back against me when u grow a dick// aite ur turn
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: 3240 794D
I came easy and still gonna merk him
I’m gonna “lyrically bomb” this little stupid kid, cuz he neva knew it That he was messin wit a lunatic, that can actually spit venomous fluid Your name fits you perfect Bomber-Z, your last against me and alphabetically Now who’s winnin you or me...well its me, but sorry that you couldn't see Sorry that your sig doesnt actually fit you but it does fit me But now you see...that I do “drop bombs” like a soldier in an army This kid ask me can I join your crew, and I said hell now just look at you I seen your battles and non of your hits, hit they just flew rite through Drop the “nine line” and “blast a shot” lyrically but it can still “hit” you And now you know how it feels to have a “punch” not pass through |
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Flyweight
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IP: 5A19 2FA7
Bomberman your verse was alright structurally but creativly it was poor. There was not much in the way of creativity or originality and the wordplay lacked too, plus there wasn't one punchline in there whihc hit it's target. Anyways I guess I can see potential as long as you keep learning and elevating it's all good man good luck.
Lunatic your verse started off well and I thought you were going to easily rip him but your whole style fell off after the first two lines: although they didn't contain punches or personals I just thought they flowed nicelt and it was a good opener. After that though it was pretty poor, just because you put ""s around a word it doesn't make the line a punchline. However, overall Lethal's was marginally better than Bomber's, structurally and creativly.
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F.C.L- Need's No Introduction-F.C.L "Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs, Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0) "Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats, Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe)) Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League |
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Flyweight
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IP: 5A19 2FA7
Yo I'll come back when I've got enough posts to vote.
Peace.
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F.C.L- Need's No Introduction-F.C.L "Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs, Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0) "Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats, Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe)) Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League |
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: 3240 794D
well I drop a nine line means I'll drop a nine the gun in my line and blast a shot to him complicated lol but thnx for the vote uppin
I had like two punches but w/e |
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Graphically Gifted
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IP: 797E BEFD
uppin for votes... people dont sleep on this battle!
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
This battle was pretty even, i had a hard time choosing who I liked the most.
Bomber-Z you need to work on your structure, it really hurts your flow, and it makes it harder to read and understand. I had to pause a few times when i was reading it. Lethal had a much better sound structure and his flow was right on point. I didnt think neither one of you used any creativity, or any good metas. The verses were both pretty generic. The punches that lethal was throwing was connecting harder. Neither of you had a good opener, but Lethal did close his battle out nicely. v/Lethal |
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.....Death Awaits.....
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IP: 25FF BF03
Bomber
Don’t try to be a Lloyd Banks wannabe/ You better “beg for mercy” so don’t even try to make a contaversy// flow is off 1/10 You probably thought I couldn’t spit this hard/ U made the wrong move by choosing that card// what card? 1/10 Yes the card where u get killed by bomber-z / Uh huh yea ur getting killed me// o that card.....not 1/10 This what ima do tie u up n throw in coffin/ Don’t try and mess wit me “I’m steady mobbin”// self hype. halfa punch 1/10 This is it rip Lethal Lunatic/ Ur not Lethal at all come back against me when u grow a dick// kinda funny. but dumb also. 2/10 No hate. But you have alot of work to do. Elaborate on your lines more. be more descriptive and creative. 6/50 Lethal I’m gonna “lyrically bomb” this little stupid kid, cuz he neva knew it That he was messin wit a lunatic, that can actually spit venomous fluid personal...but then self hype. 3/10 Your name fits you perfect Bomber-Z, your last against me and alphabetically Now who’s winnin you or me...well its me, but sorry that you couldn't see good personall....last line lil filler. 4/10 Sorry that your sig doesnt actually fit you but it does fit me But now you see...that I do “drop bombs” like a soldier in an army doesnt' flow. not good. kinda gay. 1/10 This kid ask me can I join your crew, and I said hell now just look at you I seen your battles and non of your hits, hit they just flew rite through confusin...jus alot of jibber-filler 2/10 Drop the “nine line” and “blast a shot” lyrically but it can still “hit” you And now you know how it feels to have a “punch” not pass through pretty good metiphore/wordplay, easilt best line. 6/10 Structure was good. You have the right idea on personals. Just focus a lil more on your punches now. Not bad. But not good. Just tweak up some thing's. Good Job. 16/50
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IP: 25FF BF03
O yeh.
Vote/Lehtal Drop an honest vote on the battle's in my sig. Thanks.
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo we're in the same crew you cant vote on hear but thnx for the feed back uppin
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IP: E198 D20B
bomberz... You fist bar did not rhyme..
the second bar was a simple rhyme and didn't make sense.. 3rd bar was simple rhyme scheme and whack punch the 4th and 5th were also weak, should I have to explain more.. Lethal your verse was ok, some of it was mediocre though, but it flowed better, with better stucture.. V/Lethal Yo, return tha favor in one of my battles, will you? http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132827 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132904 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133042 Peace...... |
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: 4289 77F4
........uppin...........
........will return the favor..
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Paris Hilton Gone Crip
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin
will return the favor
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