Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 06:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed for asking for votes in LL

optimized has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 06:30 PM.

And lets make this a 10 line battle. Still gotta get used to setting up.

i'll send clips to your dick to show u'r pussy
i aint no vet but u'r a average rookie
i can tell u like to bit since ya teeth been remove
what happen to your other site? must of wanting something new besides to lose
what to do shit go cut ya fingers off
cause aint noone thinks u flow sick- cause u spit after u cough
shit, punches will make ya brain flatten look what i got
a new hit, cause it aint pancake when i make ya I-hop
bars is hot like the earth core
AND u make W's easy to pick up like chore's
i got nines and tech with spleens to wet
bullets like nicklez so i'll toss change to ya hands and take the bet

Murder dude in a battle, like a horse to a saddle/
I'm toppin' this fool, now he up a creek without a paddle/
Ya brain' rattlin' distain' addin' up, won't compromise/
Cause that way this ass whoopin' won't be optomized/
Got surprises for ya, you played out like ~Toyota~/
The way I got his head ringin he must be a motarola/
Iatola qualities I'll reduce you to fallin' knees/
After my verse, yours'll have people dozin' off in Z's/
When you lose make sure to replenish you ego/
When I'm through with it, it'll be starvin' like Ethios/(Ethiopians)

Eclipsik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:57 PM.

ok I finally got it right.

Murder dude in a battle, like a horse to a saddle/
I'm toppin' this fool, now he up a creek without a paddle/
Ya brain' rattlin' distain' addin' up, won't compromise/
Cause that way this ass whoopin' won't be optomized/
Got surprises for ya, you played out like ~Toyota~/
The way I got his head ringin he must be a motarola/
Iatola qualities I'll reduce you to fallin' knees/
After my verse, yours'll have people dozin' off in Z's/
When you lose make sure to replenish you ego/
When I'm through with it, it'll be starvin' like Ethios/(Ethiopians)

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Voted For: Eclipsik

good battle....

eclipsik - good drop man, good flow, good structure, good punchs, loved the vocab man good choice of words...

optimized - not bad, kinda basic, flow was off at times, rhymes were real basic too..elevate...

v/eclipsik


please drop an honest vote on this battle as i have dropped on honest vote on yours
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143096

Voted For: optimized

i think optimized won this battle
Optimized: he had more better consitancy with his flow and had better punches and nice multis yah opener into the battle was ill shit keep it hard hitting

:eclipsik:nice verse pretty average rookie type spit i thought u should of came hard since u dropped first and optimized took advantage on u and hit u hard

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

WTF can we get some votes so this can get closed and I can finally get on with other battles without getting banned?

Voted For: Eclipsik

i gotta give this to eclipsik he had a nice ass flow n his ryhmes were tight like a virgin pussy(lol) his punchlines they were alright but betta then optimized's so.....
vote=eclipsik

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Voted For: Eclipsik

ok optimized good flow and structure and vocab yall was even in that you had ok punches and disses but eclipsk i think you won in that yours were more funny and disrespectfull close battle but i think eclipsik got this

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