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im like a ghost presence ill leave a draft in your home,
while you under your bed scared im in your slippers and robe,
fuk battle rap, im a soldier I rather battle clap,
so when you caught in a battle trap, ill get respect from battle cats,
you aint the truth, you more like an unproven theory
that why you get burned like cali whenever you stand near me
i already know that you destin to blow,
all i got to say towards that is leave that gay fagot tendencies at home,
i rather fuk you with my crome, let you feel how my girl feel
cock it back and watch that ass squeel... IM DA TRUTH....

Fuck killing him gang, I rather torture him Alive Instead
King of the rap jungle, I got it Locked, like a "Lyondred"
This Kid's not Hip Hop, his Shit's Flop, damn Bitch, Stop!
The Tricks Lost,U Been Tossed, I rap around U like a Wrist Watch
And c'mon man, really, I can never fairly Happen Ta Lose Son
My words will leave U lookin at the screen froze, like U Battled Madusa
I'll lyrically rape this MC from Dusk until the Crack of Don
This battle's like a weed session, I simply "Smoke U and Pass U On"
You say that you're good? no argument, Whatever Man
Jus yo punchlines are like H. Balloons, U let em go but they Never Land
(Helium Balloons)
U know I stay with heat and the Flames Ta Melt
So U might as well put a Quarter in your ass coz U "Played Yo Self"

LyonDreds came out the gate alright but just was hittin as well as truth good attempts on the multi's though and flow was aight...
DaTruth came wit some other shit and was hittin nearly everytime just good flow and structure made for a good rime.
both came good though but votes to
Da Truth

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DaTruth29 [~*Lady Fiya*~] shake-spear Trooper Nova

im that creative type, im the one you call when your gurl aint right,
she want a lyon not the TRUTH of an afrodike
call it quits, look at this, watch on my wrist,
ill take the soul of this m.c and put this mic in his hips
you know u wanna hit the blunt some more,nigga why pass it on,
ill spike the blunt with two rocks so you could get high some more
hey yo chek it
im joined to the hip like two couples
knock u out sensless put up 2 fingers you see doubles
birds and stars around your head like looney tunes
the cure for your aid is to stop watchin cartoons
i talk about bombs you talk about --"balloons" --.......

ld:i dint like your flow,you had stretched lines which fuked your flow,vocab was decent though...punches missed in my opinion..
DaTruthunches were good,structure was nice,best line was"smoke you n pass you on",only thing i dint like bout your verse was the H.baloon thing,it jus put me off a bit with your flow,other than that i really liked your flow........
VOTE/DATRUTH

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418

both sucked vote-datruth.....since his name sounds better

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