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Usual, no Dickride/hate/Crew votes
3-0 KO, 5 Votes to win
Due in 48 Hours

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aight checking in.
dont think i`ll need 48 hours though.
try to drop soon as.......

How can i Take you Serious, Your names associated with Trash,
if This battle was Material...
...Id be classified as gold an you as Brass!!
Talking of Names, Your Recieving Immensely Ferocious Falls, (False)
I'll prove it doesnt have to be...
...Christmas For Me to Be Decking Your Halls!!
Like Birds with broken wings, your continuously falling Short,
Looking through your battle lines...
... There More played than Basketball Courts!!
Riff raff's forgotten, Thats why he punctuates with Exclamation,
Point is he could never get high...
... Cause he seriously lacks the Elevation!!
I've laughed off this Herb with a few of strung together Lines,
Riff Calling Himself a Veteran...
...Is like an Accurate plan without Designs!!

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aight checking in stank
i`ll drop soon

im the greatest stank your whack face it.
if this were a live battle.......
.....gurls wouldnt clap if u got on stage naked.
this geek couldnt get cool if we stripped him of his clothes
took him outside in winter.......
....and buried him in snow.
i hit heavy with the flow punchlines laid out.
unlike your whole fucking verse.........
.........every rhyme played out
u couldnt knock me from my pedastool pathetic fool (pedastle)
was a better rapper than you are now.......
............b4 id even left school
your not even in a crew they all left you rejected
You Used A Shit Load Of Punches........
.......... But None Of Them Connected

daaamn that structure you both used is annoying as shit.,.

but anyway.. thestank: decent flow, a few stretched lines but nuthin major.. some good wordplay, good punches, good personals.. overall not a bad drop

riff: wasnt feelin ya punches at all.. n ya flow seemed a bit forced..

v/ thestank

yo, can you guys hit up my battle with WillNova, n drop a vote... its in my sig.... return the favor

one

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in my opinion the structure frum both of yo is wack n hard 2 read, the flow was aight for creativity n wordplay i give it to stank but b cos the punches n the flows were betta, n battles r all about the better punches i giv this ta riff raff...

v - r.r

Yeah That Structure Were Str8 Pathetic And Hard To Read.
None Of You Had Flow
Wordplay Stank
Punches Riff
Personals None
Humour Riff
Im A Have To Hand It To Riff Raff As Its Punches That Win Battles And He Tryed One In Every Line
Vote Riff Raff

Dissagree the structure used in that adds complexity but u noobs wouldnt know that.

Anyway my votes going to Stank and heres why. Stank basically was above Riff on all subjects Stanks structure was easier to read although the bolding of the letters wasnt good. Stanks punches also connected whereas Riff didnt have punches and where he tried they looked real basic, also Stank was more personal in his rhyme i liked the way he used the letters in RIFF nice imagery and wordplay...Stank had better flow too RIFFS was a bit off.

V/Stank

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Uppin Once Again... Can we fucking get this finished?

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I understand the structure, it's just annoying to see two people using it in the same battle....

This was a close battle....

The stank came with a few good punches and his flow was nice as well (yes it did flow). A few nice metas and overall a nice verse, good job

Riff Raff wasn't that bad either. His punches just didn't seem to stick. He had a few OK concepts, they just never really connected. Flow was nice as well, and overall an OK verse.....I just don't think he hit hard enough to take this one....

Vote - The Stank
Return the favor with honest votes...
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=134242&page=2

Hmmm....seems one of you have me blacklisted.....oh well, you can still both go vote in my battle if you want......no hate

*Stank*

How can i Take you Serious, Your names associated with Trash,
if This battle was Material...
...Id be classified as gold an you as Brass!!
->>I like your opener prob my favorite line

Talking of Names, Your Recieving Immensely Ferocious Falls, (False)
I'll prove it doesnt have to be...
...Christmas For Me to Be Decking Your Halls!!
->>sound like you got a dictionary and looked up big words...pretty good punch in
the second line though

Like Birds with broken wings, your continuously falling Short,
Looking through your battle lines...
... There More played than Basketball Courts!!
->>good second line kinda overused but its all good

Riff raff's forgotten, Thats why he punctuates with Exclamation,
Point is he could never get high...
... Cause he seriously lacks the Elevation!!
->>made me laugh good punch

I've laughed off this Herb with a few of strung together Lines,
Riff Calling Himself a Veteran...
...Is like an Accurate plan without Designs!!
->>wasnt feeling the last line at all

*RR*

im the greatest stank your whack face it.
if this were a live battle.......
.....gurls wouldnt clap if u got on stage naked.
->>weak

this geek couldnt get cool if we stripped him of his clothes
took him outside in winter.......
....and buried him in snow.
->>funny punchline

i hit heavy with the flow punchlines laid out.
unlike your whole fucking verse.........
.........every rhyme played out
->>decent

u couldnt knock me from my pedastool pathetic fool (pedastle)
was a better rapper than you are now.......
............b4 id even left school
->>kind fillerish

your not even in a crew they all left you rejected
You Used A Shit Load Of Punches........
.......... But None Of Them Connected
->>good closer

it was real close but i think the stank took it it seemed like there was a lot more thought put into it and even the weak spots i could still see effort...rr looked laid back like not tryin too hard and thats kinda what decided it for me you gotta bring your a-game in battles

v-stank

return the favor honest votes here: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134816

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decent feedback.
uppinthis yet again
where you all at