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Check in by: 08-03-04 at 03:41 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:42 PM.

calamity has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:52 PM.

damn ar eyou gonna check in or what man.............

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At ya lyrical peak, ya flows weak, who gave u conceit?
To make ears leak, wit flows that wouldn't fit muted beats
U think u betta than rest at best, u can mingle
Ya rhymes so cheesey ya debut's called kraft single
Ya voice is crap, bores me but cracks too much for a nap
I guess I gotta adapt to hearing screach rap
Have u heard of breath control?....ya gasps are infatic
Did you invent a microphone for asthmatics
your a lyrical quaker, u ruin tracks & boards every hour
Wit punches like the lakers post game, has no power
Whats this about, u either really wack or on a drought
Cuz all ya verses are fliers, distributed to be thrown out
U raise your verses arabic, this fact can't be denied
Cuz they're all well trained for lyrical suicide


Don't let that PLL battle fool you, this shit is serious^^^^

yo wtf you said 30 mins to drop man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Triple_N

Triple N.......your verse was okay i have seen you come better then this.....your rhyme scheem was good not the best but good.......fl0ow was okay could have worked it a lil bit more but still good.....structure was good and i enjoyed your punches.........keep it up

Calamity.......didnt enjoy your structure at all.......with all the . . . . . . . . . . .'s and shit really fucked up the flow and everything......i know that it is to show a punch but people that vote in elevated know what punches are and understand all the shit......althouh you had personals they wasnt really that good and your strucyture and flow really fucked this up for you

v/Triple for a better verse

Voted For: Triple_N

tight battle .

Calamity, you had some nice punches that hit pretty hard. Yo also had a few that were pretty weak. Overall, you did aiight in this category. Your flow was pretty good too. But it went off in a few spots. But overall, a pretty tight verse. Not that bad.

Triple_N, you had some hot punches in thise. None really hit that weak. Really good job in this category. Your flow was also pretty good two. It went off in a few places, but it was a little better than Calamitys. OVerall, a very tight verse. You got this one.

V/Triple_N. no hate

^^^ Ur such a tool.


ugh

Uppin for some honets well explained votes>>>>>>>>>

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ima break it down as io see it.

triple n.

At ya lyrical peak, ya flows weak, who gave u conceit?
To make ears leak, wit flows that wouldn't fit muted beats
^^flow/multies gud..punch was a decent concept 7/10

U think u betta than rest at best, u can mingle
Ya rhymes so cheesey ya debut's called kraft single
^^maybe not a hard punch,but fummy shit though.!7/10

Ya voice is crap, bores me but cracks too much for a nap
I guess I gotta adapt to hearing screach rap
^^hmm not feelin that 5/10
Have u heard of breath control?....ya gasps are infatic
Did you invent a microphone for asthmatics
haha..again not 2 hard though..7/10
your a lyrical quaker, u ruin tracks & boards every hour
Wit punches like the lakers post game, has no power
^^gud creativity..punch decent 7/10
Whats this about, u either really wack or on a drought
Cuz all ya verses are fliers, distributed to be thrown out
^^again decent 7/10
U raise your verses arabic, this fact can't be denied
Cuz they're all well trained for lyrical suicide
^^ok..not that hot 6/10

overall..32/50....seen beta from you.gud flow/great multies,structure simple and effective.i think sum of your bars were funny if not that hard hittin.
maybe upp personals(although its hard wit this new wack system).

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free agent

sorry fucked the post.......

calamity
Go and try to get personals..go ahead check my thread logs..
how you expect to beat a Class-sick. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . when you couldnt even take a hedge-hog..
^^decent opener 7/10
im bout leave your face boned, knuckles to face Calaborations..
this the first time i beat you...my bad theres more occasions..
^^hmm not really feelin this one 5/10
you trip when you write, like you jump roping with tied laces..
......iv seen better "runs for my money", on tv Police chases..
^^ha..quite witty.. 7/10
.... N its not fiction, you know you out of your juristiction..
you couldnt "drive" me away,if you were playin with stick shifts..
^^seemed a lil forced to rhyme 6/10
you wouldnt be "high n mighty", if Muscle bound and catapulted..
im eating him at high altitudes like he was a Turky-Vulture!..
^^hmm..again rhymin was a lil forced.. 6/10
Triple_n, you a triple no body, no one cares 3 times over..
like your shadow was retractable, man you cast is over..
ok closer 6/10

overall 37/60...........
punches not quite as consistent as triple.....overall a nice verse,i felt sum lines were a lil forced to rhyme,other than that i thinjk triple had u a lil on punches

vote triple...

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free agent

wtf????is there no poll?.....
or am i not allowed to?


cud u both return an honest vote on this plz?(sum nice well explained votes plz!)
me vs flow int(topical)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138223

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free agent

umm no u posted your vote in the wrong place so it doesn't count

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