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BigChase 0 0%
MR.Goodbar 5 100.00%
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Old 07-09-04, 06:16 PM   #1
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Arrow MR.Goodbar vs. Bigbitch..err.BigChase

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Hey Yo! BigChase private messaged me saying...
10 lines....you spit first......set it up bitch.....


First of all, that's a bitch move challenging me then tell me to spit first? But I don't give a fuck, I private messaged him back and said
Shit I come back from work and find this? Iight bitch, it's on like Donkey kong? And after you read my slaughter to you, don't be a little bitch and go changing your signature and avatar like I know you'll wanna do. LET'S GO!!!


And guess what bitch, I'm spittin 15 barz cuz if you're so fucking badass, you could take me in 10? Right?! Fuck, I'll even let you spit 20 and have a round 2!!!

Bigchase must've swigged his shit-laced/ and got shit-faced/
Challeng me? You bout to "lose" like you've been misplaced/
ILL enough to go to a knife-fight knifeless/ fight and survive it/
Leave my opponent life-less/ Leave his eyes without eye-lids/
Take his licence to kill without one slit on my grill/
The only thing you "BigChase" is donuts rolling down the hill/
I'll pound this "Soljah" down into the ground until we squash beef/
(*Psh *Psh *Psh ) There, now you the "streets"!/
B. Chase, I don't need pencils to battle or make you erase/
I eat-mase and spit it back into B's face *sppizz* Here have a taste/
Now-blast your most stout-raps out-fast that you-have thus far/
I'll leave this "Big Boi" an "outkast" like his avatar/
Enough of the bluffs that erupt from your mouth's lips/
Just read my signature..http://www.thebikinidorm.com/nuts.jpg/

Yeah nigga, like only the Candy-Man can
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Old 07-09-04, 06:44 PM   #2
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ROFL^ nuts in your mouth hahahahaha.. thats funny shit.. ima vote after big chase spits.. nice drop.. bigchase, make it a good battle ..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134137
^ i will be back to voteon this.. hit mine up while i wait
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Old 07-09-04, 07:20 PM   #3
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Just so you can understand my disses better since BigChase seems to be sleeping on the battle he called me out on here is his avatar and his signature.
 
Old 07-09-04, 07:27 PM   #4
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lol, I can't wait to see this. Even though we on da same crew Big, you gotta come hard if you wanna win this. That shit was funny.
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Old 07-09-04, 07:48 PM   #5
Keith Moon
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oo sorry i was away man...i left the siteo n was away.....how long it take you to spit this hsit.....did y freestyle it or pre-written....
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Old 07-09-04, 08:00 PM   #6
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neither one, it was keystyled, and I'm still waiting
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Old 07-09-04, 08:12 PM   #7
Keith Moon
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okay i just say the battle....i went to the beach and left rb minimized...........im start typin mine.........
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Old 07-09-04, 08:22 PM   #8
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HURRY UP AND BRING IT!! Quit Stalling

Here, I'll even give you a line...
I'm street smart, speak sparks that blister and melt Goodbar's "d-bars"/
So all that's left is "goo", so theirs no Mister to speak on/


Their! Thats a tight line against me USE IT! WHATEVER!!! JUST HURRY THE FUCK UP!!!!
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Old 07-09-04, 08:25 PM   #9
Keith Moon
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This testicle obsessed faggot knocked up an ugly ass whore
Even when he makes sound effects his bitch cant find "Mr.Herbs" dick though...
All these empty threats of killin emcees is gettin irrelevant
He calls me bigbitch cause Im the one who gots his babys mama pregnant..
In your battle you also mentioned your affection for Tupacs dick
This Max Hardcore jerkin, antagonist rhymes would be Slick if he was Rick..
Even if he was the Streets this dude aint neva gonna be hardcore
Did ya see hes a racist too this Candy Bar is poster boy form the Klu Klux Klan
This "badass" pissed cuz he came on his sister, got her pregnant, and the only action was wit his hand..\
How bout leave suburbia and take yo weakass pre-written shit to realists
Even if he was on Deathrow Candy-Bar dick still wouldnt be a killah..


a quickie.....im busy so yeah.....nice psit no hate......

explainations for htose who be slow..: He always says nuts in your muth(testicle obsessed), the gurl im tlakin bout (see the mebers pictures), His avatar is Cannibus(Mr. Herb aka weed),all his verse say how hell kill someone(irrelevant), said the chick he was wit was his babies momma(got her pregnant), He left a link for Max Hardcore:a nasty XXX site and mentioned tupacs dick in his verse gainst Poetic justice..,mentioned the streets(streets=hard ala hardcore), he said nigga and hes pure white (racist), odnt wanna explain the rest....
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Old 07-09-04, 08:26 PM   #10
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there.....the explainations took most of the time...........god ur impatient..........i hate typing im super slow at it......
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Old 07-09-04, 08:30 PM   #11
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yo i took tha street soljah thing off my sig cuz my sig had too many characters.....
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Old 07-09-04, 08:32 PM   #12
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OH MAN! Yall please up this shit! I'm begging you! Fuck, I'll let cha crew vote on it! You did alot of fuckin research and explanation for that to be a quick reply plus you a slow typer? shit dont smell right? But whuteva..yall up this shit! Miss Lyricist[b], [b]Calamity, yall come back on a rock this vote.
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Old 07-09-04, 08:37 PM   #13
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Wow, I really expected a lot more from this.....

Mr Goodbar was OK. He had a few OK punches but most were ehh. He flowed OK but was off in a few spots. He had a little bit of wit behind his punches but it was minimal. Overall, like I said, it was an OK verse...

BigChase was pretty much horrible. He didn't even rhyme in his opener, let alone most of his bars. He needs to learn that you can't type five lines and call it one bar. Wit wasn't apparent. Overall, his verse just lacked everything. You need to just start practicing on your structure. Learn how to make your lines even, and for gods sake, learn how to rhyme....

Vote - Mr Goodbar
 
Old 07-09-04, 08:48 PM   #14
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I can't vote on this because Big's in my crew, but I can leave an opinion.

Flow- Mr. Goodbar. His lines may have been shorter, but line length doesn't matter. You've got make sure that when people read your verse, they can breeze through it easily and with comprehention. Big, your verse was rather stretched. Work on your sylables, it'll help the flow.

Structure- Tied. Nothing flawd with the way y'all wrote yah verses.

Punches- Big, I must say that although Mr.Goodbar was funny, you hit harder. Even though some of the shit you wrote was play'd, I saw some originality there.

Personals- Big, I noted the way you used Goodbar's pic in your verse. Nice one.

Multies and Wordplay- Both go the Mr.Goodbar, he had some nice ones in his verse.

Funny- Definitly went to Mr.Goodbar. Your sig just cracks me up man. Big, you can include hard punches as well as funny ones brah, but I didn't see any this time around.


Overall vote... I'll keep that to myself. But this was a tight battle, I'm out.
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Old 07-09-04, 08:50 PM   #15
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Goodbar killed him. There was nothin creative in Chases verse. This battle kinda sucked cuz it was one sided. Good bar had the punches on his side. He had a good structure and flow to it too. Chases verse was weak because there was basically nothing that caught my attention. Yeah....Good bar took this hands down.

Vote - Goodbar

Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759

or this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111
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