wassup all people, I just joined this site, and would like some people to read this and tell me what ya think. thnx, Prephix. :::::

I hafta spit-it to get-this lift-ed from my chest -n-/
I am goin insane thinkin bout the pain I invest in/
Its a tru blessin the gift of rhymes the gift of answering questions/
Lyrics of poetry and epic tall tales from the streets/
Laced with beats attached to a picture adding the heat/
Its a true journey, freestyling tryin to be flyin through tourneys/
Scripts I gather from suggest my grips on matter/
Latters cant make you seem bigger, but you can change the laugher/
Stone-aged bats used by cavemen is a way they brutally manage/
Giant lizzards expell hell and cuase ireperall damage/
Dinosaurs get a quick snack ruthlessly chompin on flesh and bone/
While people sit helplessly and wait for a raptor to explode their dome/
I'm home when I'm in a mind state of aggression and anger/
Throwin bricks and swingin' wrenches straight suggestin' danger/
Look into this flow-son and no one will be seen through ya caterax/
Bring ya guns, clips, gangs, slips and I bring a battle-axe/
The battles just begun so let's shake down to it/
Revoke the mask of skin that I blew if you knew it/
But underneath is a titanium stadium structure/
Freight trains filed with wieghts-a-pain have no conductor/
Prefixin to be dismissin ya fresh peircings my words punctured/

just a quick toss, Lemme kno what ya think ya'll its much appriciated.
God bless, Prephix.

Even with the body of a tree you couldn’t party free and bear leaves
Hair got fleas bring the hot shot, got a slop plot drop to your knees
Kiss my ring, twist your bling say what you piss and sing?
Your crummy scriptures are just funny pictures all a cartoon thing
Scooby Doo want to see you, not my fault you busy and whack
With a Walt Disney Contract, call Mickey Mouse

(this aint a battle reply, cuz if u wanna battle we can set that up. Jus an OPENMIC.)
AHHHAAHHHH!!!!!!:
Scenery since some subtal saclusion/ Denile destruction
diliberate dilutions/ Righteous rhino's run real routes/Otopsy
optical oxes option out/ Never need no nautical notches/ Blood
boxes break beat blotches/
Awesome archery are artistic arson/ Call it clear color connin Ft. Carson/
Prefix penitentary plagues/ Damage does darkness defining dry days/
Get gone greatness gives god givin gifts/ Livin life like lightness lifts/
Tightness too tryin to touch/ Rydin right rhymes recieving reading ruff/
Mouths mutter maybe miles more morbit/Tritans titans torcher touchin' torment/
Everlasting extreme everythings ending enormity/
Sorry son Scriptures syke supporting socery/
Habitual history hissing honorable hispanics/
Try to top this the terrifying titanics/
Fishing finishes finding forwardable flames/
Incredible insight inscribes intallerable
insane. Insanity/ Very vague vanishing vanity/
Underground untouchibles uncover Undying unions/
Relapses recharge reading rappers raritys riding rythms reunions/
Kidney kadograms kill ku-kluts-klan'men/
Artificial abundantcies are already abandoned/
Wether weathers wonderful wondering wully-momaths wierdly write/
be quiet quit questioning a quadrants quote-rights/
xenogomy xenology xenogamous xylose/ young yankees yodel you've been
yeilding dino's/zodiacs zap zip tops redefinings zones zooligically placing zip codes/
This was The Pre-qual to the sequal of an epic
proportional story/ Just as sure as Jesus died we give him glory/
Never know whats next with Fickz wether its blood and gore/
Alphabetic abunant redundast is my lyrical war/

I like your style man some good rhymes, builds a nice picture.

THNX DAWG, FA REAL, holla back. AHHHAHHHHH!