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Old 07-10-04, 04:56 PM   #1
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The Stank Vs Truth Aka....

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10 lines
due Midnight (GMT) tonight (July 10th)
3 votes to win
The usual, no bullshit, dr or hate votes.
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Old 07-10-04, 05:20 PM   #2
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Truth's an Oxymoron, The real truth is he's false and an imitation,
this herb couldn't beat out a lyric...
...If he was named after Masturbation!!!
Best off joining the circus, the only way you'll recieve applause,
I'd say i was the Queen of England...
...But i'd be lying like your "minor flaws"!!
I'll flip your name, cause your most definitely A Kollapsing Artist,
You could blatantly bite my style...
...And you still wouldnt the smartest!!
Your whole corrupt image is a lie, still living in doubt and Denial,
The chances of you winning are delayed...
...Resembling a Micheal Jackson court trial!!
Just like in the Cartoons, i'll end this with a "Thats all Folks",
And leave Truth alone to think how...
...to form lines without played jokes!!
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Old 07-10-04, 05:52 PM   #3
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aighty'ho lets go.....

Stank is the epitome of 'faggot'...he's left wit 'F'eelings of 'A'nxiety...'G'raspin 'G'uns 'O'nly 'T'aunting my vengence...// 1
I didn't feel right dissin this faggot for no reason...my gangsta instincts told me to herb up so I blunted my lethal 'tensions'// 2
I like to Knock out Personals, so Hide-ya-Image,da truth gets in ya Head so Bad you’d forget ya Mind-was-in-It// 3
ya Prime-is-Finished, Against me… tha only way you’ll See da Upper Hand is if you were Timin’-Minutes//4
I’ve heard ya Timid-Speach, ya just not ‘Touchin Much’, Sorta-like-a-‘Midgetz-Reach’…// 5
Credits to my Name is ya only Missin’-Link, Surround yaself with Indians to ‘Sun Dance’ if you wanna ‘Bring-da-Heat//6
Crazy flow-delivery, dont need Kathy Bates films to show-u-Misery, without a wack-emcee translator I dont even know-ur-dissin-me//7
Quit makin un-necessary fool yourself..,im-Spectacular, and you're far from my Hardest-of-Challengers// 8
Beat'in wit style,no admittance jus denial could'nt defeat 'Truth' if ya were 'Lion',
gettin 'ya-ass-kicked' extinct you like 'jur-as-sic' wit ya bones cry'in..//9 & 10

vote honestly......
 
Old 07-10-04, 06:21 PM   #4
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Ima have to say Stank easily here...

Truth you had a nice drop but your lines were really stretched and your flow was only half-way there. Punches were so-so.

Stank you had an obviouse much better verse here. You seem new. haven't seen you but ur definitly a vet wit your style. Your punches were much harder and your flo was right on key.Also i got a kick out of some of your metiphores an wordplay. they made me laugh.

No hate. Easy One here.
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Old 07-10-04, 07:15 PM   #5
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Old 07-11-04, 01:38 AM   #6
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Stank, you had a nice verse.. it flowed well with a nice structure.. your punches hit pretty hard, and you had some nice metas.. Truth, you had some decent punches but your lines were stretched a bit too far and it made the entire verse choppy.. I'ma have to give this one to Stank, for an all-around nice verse.. Much respect to both of ya tho..

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Old 07-11-04, 07:34 AM   #7
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Old 07-11-04, 08:40 AM   #8
PoEtIc JuStIcE
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aiight stank easily........

first beta structure/flow.....
second his punches were harder..used metas well

truth came wit a gud verse 2......it jus lacked compared to stank

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Old 07-11-04, 08:50 AM   #9
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Stank- The way this was structured was a great assistant to the quality of the verse which made it easy for me to catch the flow..with some decent vocab and wordplay, however as far the punches go they where aight but nuttin special..none of them made me go wow!!! ouch!!..perhaps thats because of ur lack of knowledge of the opponent..was still a decent verse though

Truth

Some Punches i was quite impressed with..some nice worplay also..but the lines were REALLLYYY streched to fuck at the same time affected the flow of the verse..in which swayed this battle toward the stank rather than u! if the lines were shortened this verse would of been much more effective

V/ The stank all round better verse
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Old 07-11-04, 12:06 PM   #10
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stank

Truth's an Oxymoron, The real truth is he's false and an imitation,
this herb couldn't beat out a lyric...
decent opener
...If he was named after Masturbation!!!
Best off joining the circus, the only way you'll recieve applause,
LOL..funny shyt
I'd say i was the Queen of England...
...But i'd be lying like your "minor flaws"!!
iight decent punchlines
I'll flip your name, cause your most definitely A Kollapsing Artist,
You could blatantly bite my style...
lol... decent punchlines..
...And you still wouldnt the smartest!!
Your whole corrupt image is a lie, still living in doubt and Denial,
decent
The chances of you winning are delayed...
...Resembling a Micheal Jackson court trial!!
lol..funny
Just like in the Cartoons, i'll end this with a "Thats all Folks",
And leave Truth alone to think how...
...to form lines without played jokes!!
decent closer


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Stank is the epitome of 'faggot'...he's left wit 'F'eelings of 'A'nxiety...'G'raspin 'G'uns 'O'nly 'T'aunting my vengence...// 1decent opener but not really feelin the fist line
I didn't feel right dissin this faggot for no reason...my gangsta instincts told me to herb up so I blunted my lethal 'tensions'// 2decent line but played
I like to Knock out Personals, so Hide-ya-Image,da truth gets in ya Head so Bad you’d forget ya Mind-was-in-It// 3lol..decent line one of your best
ya Prime-is-Finished, Against me… tha only way you’ll See da Upper Hand is if you were Timin’-Minutes//4wack line ....played
I’ve heard ya Timid-Speach, ya just not ‘Touchin Much’, Sorta-like-a-‘Midgetz-Reach’…// 5
Credits to my Name is ya only Missin’-Link, Surround yaself with Indians to ‘Sun Dance’ if you wanna ‘Bring-da-Heat//6decent
Crazy flow-delivery, dont need Kathy Bates films to show-u-Misery, without a wack-emcee translator I dont even know-ur-dissin-me//7
Quit makin un-necessary fool yourself..,im-Spectacular, and you're far from my Hardest-of-Challengers// 8okay line but not your best
Beat'in wit style,no admittance jus denial could'nt defeat 'Truth' if ya were 'Lion',
gettin 'ya-ass-kicked' extinct you like 'jur-as-sic' wit ya bones cry'in..//9 & 10decent finish but could have been alot better

vote=the stank
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