10 lines (+)
no:crew

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quote your own damn lyrics...

checked in
also:
no feeding.
no biting.
no hate.
no dick riding.

status check.....
....VA...ur a wanna-vet-An ya tryna front wit Jet?....
lol.....ok.......

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VA's ryhme's got more circulation than U.S dimes....
arrest u an ur PC at the same time......
on accusation's...typing....ur "destined 2 ryhme?"1
I'll pump 5 bar's strait to your chest...erase ya flesh
thinkin u the best..VA..your waste of an IP address....2
This aint a test....You came in "thread"-n-left "undressed"
Like u forget, now 1 win less...........................
...............You actually tried to mess wit Carsonjet3

Noticed ya rules-only one-no crew-so u could go-an-bite a few
DR one or two,and go on a recycle a bar as If i haven't view'd

Bitch you have no clue.......

It's simple arithmatic, a win fer me...an "L" for you.
Tomorrow afternoon....PM me...an tell me how it feels at 6-an-2

... a few days later...


carsonJET aka adict, this marque was a glitch from tha start...
...Failure to quit, so consider these text as sendin this bitch on depart. (jet/plane)
Heres yor ticket, I already put yor baggage through...
...theres 1 carson, 2 JETS, 3. Typos and 4 attitudes. (Added 2/carsonjetX2+2)
iLL sit you on a flight filled with iraqis, so yor for sure crashin to death...
....“hi sir im a doctor, its good that yor hearts pumpin, but yor lackin yor breath.
im changin carson of flight, to carson of tha operation table...
...they won when they fought to keep you stable, at this price you bought tha rate:"disabled".

...this guy can predict tha future, cuz thats my result once yor put to rest in 2 lines. (1st bar)

erm bye

personals:va.... cuz (carson JET) and tha whole airplane theme
structure:va.... had a storyline to it
punches:va.....they hit, and unlike carson’s, you cud read them w/o stumbeling
vocab:carson...(sike)....cuz he misspelled his own name


vote: VA , points to tha fam
real votes??

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quote your own damn lyrics...

you voted on yourself.......

oh my....this is my first up. -1

iLL take it out to make you feel better, votes em bye.

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quote your own damn lyrics...

up 2.

Close bAttle....Very close


VA-Nice spit..that ish was tight...
you had vocabulary with the similies and metaphores..
Only a few bugs but you had some creativity which gave you this
The structure was basic and decent...
8/10

Carson-Nice drop too...Very close battle for both
you had some good stuff like multies..Lack
in creativity..Structure wasnt that aight..But ya similies
murked it..Good job....
7.9/10

Overall-CLose battle...Very close but carson jet might win the battle
isnt over yet...Nice SPit from both

v/VA Becuz I think hes Creativity Murked it..

Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129056

kind of murked him with the personals but Didnt try hard

Return the favor Please

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are u fuckin seriouse? omfg...uppin...3

Aiyo Check It..

CarsonJet2X: 7/10
Your Punches Weren't Hitting Real Hard...But I Liked The Creativitiy and Your Ryhme Scheme Was Definitly Hot. Your Metaphors and Mulits Were Decent. Nice Drop Man.

VA: 5/10
Your Punches Coulda Been Hotter With More Wordplay...Your Punches Kinda Lacked Sense...Use More Vocab and Word Usuage...But Nice Drop To You Too.

Vote- Carson For Better Punches and Wordplay

~R~

Uppin 2

uPPin

Uppin 3

This was a close & one of the best I've seen on RB so far.

FLOW/STRUCTURE=Carson
PERSONLS=VA
MULTIES=Carson had like one,but VA had none so he gets this
WORDPLAY=VA
CREATIVITY=BOTH
PUNCHES=VA,by a couple of hairs

Very close battle.Both some creative stuff in there.VA punches were a tad bit better,so he gets this vote from for that and his creativity.

Holla back at least one of my battles

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