RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Joval8 0 0%
YaYo 5 100.00%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07-11-04, 12:08 AM   #1
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
YaYo Vz Joval8

IP: F04B 70DC

iight heres how it goes down:

5-10 bars
no d/r,crew or hate votes
3-0 votes K.O.
5 votes wins

U SPIT first and ill follow up after u!!!!
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-11-04, 12:43 AM   #2
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
IP: F04B 70DC

cmon yo spit so we can get this started
Or imma spit and forfeit the battle
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-11-04, 01:12 AM   #3
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
IP: F04B 70DC

Iight den imma spit since u takin so long.......

ayo ayo

Yo look at this mc he got a DJ for an avatar//
But he aint ill enough to even drop a bar//
Makin you stumble and slip like u juss stepped in black tar//
Got this mc thinkin he sik but he cant even drive a car//
ayo Like pepto bismol i got chu on the run//
You prolly so scared, ya got cha pants weighin a ton//
Look where hes from, hes from M.I.A, isnt that missin in action??//
Yea i think it is cuz he didnt spit wid a reaction//
He QUICK TO BACKDOWN like dem bravehearts say//
Cuz he wont wanna spit after wat he juss seen today//
Yo i got this kid in line bout to get served give me ya lunch tray//
Joval gotta learn to drop rhymes the right way//
Leave you like the twin towers crashin to the ground//
While ill be alive standin there with the crown//
Spit roundz at cha like i do it wid no sound//
Joval be on the floor while his brains splattered down//
This mcs rhymes "stank poor" they all up ~in-cents~//
He all shakin and sh*t juss because my rhymes juss intense//
Got this kid suffocating like he got the bends//
Leave ya unnamed cuz ya spit gotta mend////


YO HOLLA ans spit back maynnnnnnnnnnnn iight PEACEEEEEE
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-11-04, 01:39 AM   #4
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
IP: F04B 70DC

YO joval8 holla at cha boy and spit ya stuff yo. if u dont spit soon in a day, then imma have to forfeit you and i get the win PEACEEE
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-11-04, 05:34 PM   #5
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
IP: F04B 70DC

Yo joval8 check in man so we can get this battle started. I already drop my stuff and u was the one who said u wanted to battle WASUP???
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-12-04, 03:12 PM   #6
Joval8
New to RB
 
Joval8's Avatar
 
From: M.I.A
IP: 7553 CF62

yo dog sorry i had alot of work:
Ey yayo, its not ya day yo, wen u fuck wit me u cant play yo, Ill stay low,
i had to work full-day hoe...
aN I AM SICK, Ill spit diddy spit ma rhymes in yo face yo...
U fake ass tony yayo, u think im done wit ma rhYMES
i aint think so...
U prolly sit in yo house screamin yay, but no...
Dogg, afta this u gua be troubled, doubled, layin flat on yo back ova tha rubble...
But me im celebratin ma victory,
Damb.... I shouldnt be doin dis shit 4 free...
I cant believe im spittin against a chump like thee,
How u gonna make fun of a boy from Mi-am-i, when u come from fuckin Ha-wa-ii..
Dogg, This rap shit is too hard for u, go wax ya board, cause this battle got me walkin out tha door...
An u talkin bout rounds.. this aint fuckin basket ball, Dogg, they aint no rebound..
An this shits almost done, I can imagine yo frown, u loook like a fuckin clown...
 
Old 07-12-04, 05:12 PM   #7
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
IP: F04B 70DC

iight iight thanks for spittin mayn. I thought u wasnt even gonna spit. Well uppin fa votes now and vote honestly. Nice spit joval
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-12-04, 05:14 PM   #8
FlipSix
Banned: Cheating
 
From: Dinuba Cali
IP: EC0B 84C7

yo i'm gonna go for yayo in this one dude joval that rhyme is wack dawg
Send a message via MSN to FlipSix Send a message via Yahoo to FlipSix  
Old 07-12-04, 05:23 PM   #9
FlipSix
Banned: Cheating
 
From: Dinuba Cali
IP: EC0B 84C7

aight breaking down the spit, something that joval spitted was orignal and it wasn't good enought to take out yayo fo sho
Send a message via MSN to FlipSix Send a message via Yahoo to FlipSix  
Old 07-12-04, 05:47 PM   #10
FlipSix
Banned: Cheating
 
From: Dinuba Cali
IP: EC0B 84C7

Punches: punches yayo had a little more disses towards joval
Multis: ok yayo lines was better, but the action and reaction was not good but i didn't like joval mi-am-i and ha-wa-ii rhyme it was retarded and sounded like something a little kid would write
Metas: now the yayo made more metas cause you can't jovals was about calling him a hoe and him having victory sounded very immature
Structure: joval cause it was longer, but yayo kept it consistent
Flow: yayo flows was good, and joval wrote like lines to long and to short
Send a message via MSN to FlipSix Send a message via Yahoo to FlipSix  
Old 07-12-04, 09:00 PM   #11
Replay
you gotta hear me again
 
Replay's Avatar
 
From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
IP: C205 3397

Joval8 what was with at flow? one line had 5 words and the next 15 that fuck up. plus the style sucked punches weak and personnals were not there. i don't think that mults were there cause of the flow overall i didn't like it.

yayo it was good flow was happening and damn let me just say it was all there.
best line: He QUICK TO BACKDOWN like dem bravehearts say//
Cuz he wont wanna spit after wat he juss seen today//
Yo i got this kid in line bout to get served give me ya lunch tray//
Joval gotta learn to drop rhymes the right way//

you no who i'm voting for
__________________
RePlay
(0,0) 0 KOs
Send a message via AIM to Replay  
Old 07-12-04, 10:25 PM   #12
YaYo
Flyweight
 
From: HAWAII....THA ROCK
IP: F04B 70DC

iight iight thanks AKA the votes is 2-0 Yayo is up

Upp them votes now peeps
Send a message via AIM to YaYo  
Old 07-12-04, 11:10 PM   #13
Paris Hilton666
Paris Hilton Gone Crip
 
IP: 4289 77F4

joval-

Structure: 4/10
Flow: 4/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 4/10
enjoyed: 2/10
Overall: 3.3/10

YaYo-

Structure: 6/10
Flow: 5/10
Punches:5/10
Personals: 4/10
Enjoyed: 6/10
Overall: 5.1/10

vote: YaYo
__________________
A crip just like Bonecollector
 
Old 07-13-04, 12:27 AM   #14
e-dubz
Banned: Biting
 
From: da 215
IP: 2C69 8F6D

damn joval ur structure and flow was fucked up and thats wut lost it for u..ur punches were iight but work on the flow
yayo u had some hot punches and ur flow was nice so i gotta give it to u
no hate
V/Yayo
Send a message via AIM to e-dubz  
Old 07-13-04, 01:27 AM   #15
Implicit
-BTR-
 
IP: EC0B 84C7

ay joval i aint got any idea what was up with ur whole flow. man ur lines werent even. i liked yayo's style he came with something different and his flow was on point

vote - yayo
 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:14 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.