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07-16-04, 07:50 PM | #1 | ||||
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Mjust23 "KeyStyle"
IP: 3240 794D
LL COOL J( HEADSPRUNG KEYSTYLE)
they call me big j'y im a spraya true playa wanna position jus saya to much chris say a praya spit ev-ery daya now tip it up for girlz in da midda dont trust that-she a kidda wit a yankee fitta j cool j big dicka can ya stick ha(her) hell yea can ya hit ha(her) Keystle to Lean Back Beat j to mizz-i ride till i dizz-i poopin up out the 4-40-fizz-i jumpback wit a leanin hat take that wit a bat now mama come dine on ma lap cause me now wanna rap fuck that c'mon lets............lean back Keystyle to Hotel Beat im the rollz dub on twenty wheelz do watever i feelz jamacin fat like jae millz tired pop some pillz burned out on the bq grillz stack 2 dollar billz now im gettin chillz |
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07-16-04, 08:00 PM | #2 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
Structure Was Fucked You Couldve Connected Linez Like
they call me big j'y...im a spraya...true playa.... wanna position jus saya...to much chris say a praya...... Get Creative Its Not About Rhyme Scheme Get Creative like Im Like A Redneck Dippin Cuz Im spit ev-ery daya..... use Creativity Structure Needs Fixxed..Use Yo intellgence And Use Vocab U learned In School.... Aight 4/10 Seen Better U a Get It....
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07-16-04, 10:47 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: A621 A1C1
not the best thing ive seen.you could work on your structure.PoLiFiCK is right in my opinion.
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