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Old 07-16-04, 07:50 PM   #1
Guranteed
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Exclamation Mjust23 "KeyStyle"

IP: 3240 794D

LL COOL J( HEADSPRUNG KEYSTYLE)

they call me big j'y
im a spraya
true playa
wanna position jus saya
to much chris say a praya
spit ev-ery daya
now tip it up for girlz in da midda
dont trust that-she a kidda
wit a yankee fitta
j cool j big dicka
can ya stick ha(her)
hell yea can ya hit ha(her)

Keystle to Lean Back Beat
j to mizz-i
ride till i dizz-i
poopin up out the 4-40-fizz-i
jumpback wit a leanin hat
take that wit a bat
now mama come dine on ma lap
cause me now wanna rap
fuck that
c'mon lets............lean back

Keystyle to Hotel Beat
im the rollz dub on twenty wheelz
do watever i feelz
jamacin fat like jae millz
tired pop some pillz
burned out on the bq grillz
stack 2 dollar billz
now im gettin chillz
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Old 07-16-04, 08:00 PM   #2
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Structure Was Fucked You Couldve Connected Linez Like

they call me big j'y...im a spraya...true playa....
wanna position jus saya...to much chris say a praya......


Get Creative Its Not About Rhyme Scheme Get Creative like

Im Like A Redneck Dippin Cuz Im spit ev-ery daya.....

use Creativity Structure Needs Fixxed..Use Yo intellgence And Use Vocab U learned In School....

Aight 4/10 Seen Better U a Get It....
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Old 07-16-04, 10:47 PM   #3
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not the best thing ive seen.you could work on your structure.PoLiFiCK is right in my opinion.
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