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Old 07-17-04, 05:31 PM   #1
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spit fire

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i spit fire, spit flames, bout tha size of tha earth
it'll leave ya hot, leave ya burnt n the bak of a hearse
mah rhymes r unstopable , untouchable, unbreakable
ill neva be beatin cuz, it aint capable

i gots all deez niggaz knocked up, poped up, shooked up
im repin Va, erryone else, gon' thru hood up
i got this rap game on lock, cuz i cant be beatin
i get pussy all dai, but ya mommas is tha one i be eatin

roll tha blunt up, puff puff, give
thas how tha gangstas do it, thas how i live
tha shit i spit is incredible
jus lik Be'yonce ass, its beautiful
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Old 07-17-04, 05:32 PM   #2
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yo give some feedbacks of wat u think
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Old 07-17-04, 05:41 PM   #3
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lol kid what u like 14 or someshit but umm

didnt feal this shooked up dont make since its shook up

grammer is weak everything is weak i say u need to elvate on everthing learn how to get some creativitie in ya verses an quit worryin about talkin about weed when all ya shit got seeds an stems in it

shit should be deleted but keep practicin an maybe u could elevate i said maybe
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Old 07-18-04, 05:51 PM   #4
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um.its, good but whats the meaning put some power in it,and u will go far.

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