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This dude thinks he's tough...but he hasn't even feel me yet
I'll back hand him so hard he'll be slapped super sillyest
He seems so quick to reply to my callout in bitchslapped
So he's only present....cause he seems to be giftwrapped
Why even show?.........You'll probably just get ridiculed
You're known as rat turd...cause your dropping is miniscule
I'm droppin ill.....of course I don't believe you got the skill
Got you so addicted you'll.....probably start popping pills
Why did you even check in? It was over before it started
You claim to be trash talking....but all I've seen was garbage

WOW!!! You're way overdue.....Are you even gonna drop something, or am I gonna have to DQ you?

ayo i make these niggas shiver when they see da glock/ bullets hit ya liver make ya heart skip a knock/ and im only sixteen did i mention?/ but my rhymes leave cats heads spinnin in different dimensions/ and these old heads always asking whos hot?/ ya rap soundin like you just dug it out of ya shoe box/ my lyrics is pretty they leave hoes blushin/ but hands game is ugly i leave you with a nose concussion/ start discussin if i should pull out the heater/ cuz i carry two twins the size of kobes sneakers/ im the hood creeper you a low key stanger/ i got niggas that move weight like obes trainer/ i got niggas dat move weight in heavy traffic/ dont jump stupid my cuz my gun tends to get kinda tragic/ they way i play with rhymes im a rap magician/ when my heat clap back watch ya whole family be missin

gunit took this one...He had some good punches in there like the one about trashtalking. Believe it or not i havent seen a line like that. Supercious, you need ta fix ya structure...you had some good punches in there too but I couldnt really keep the flow cuz your structure was off. Big ups ta both....gunit won with good punches and a better structure.

Vote - gunit


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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

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AIGHT I THOUGHT THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT SUPER YOUR STRUCTURE KILLED YOUR VERSE DAWG,YA HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES/WAS'NT FEELIN YOUR FLOW,GUNIT,I THOUGHT YOUR VERSE WAS BETTER CAUSE OF STRUCTURE N FLOW,YA ALSO HAD A COUPLE OF GOOD PUNCHES THAT I LIKED OVERALL DECENT BATTLE"KEEP IT UP" VOTE/GUNIT

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134020
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025

LOL.....you took all that time for that? Lets get some more votes..

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Opener - gunit (close, but super's didn't hit hard at all)
Closer - gunit (again, super's didn't hit)
Structure - gunit (wtf super?)
Flow - super (actually flows nice if ya read it)
Punches - gunit (super, your punches need to be WAY more direct)
Metas - super (a couple)
Personals - gunit (a couple)


OVERALL - .gunit101

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C'mon.....lets get some more votes up in here to close this shit out.....

this was a close battle but in my view g unit merked him in the end super... did infact merk his self wid that wack flow n structure

v - 101