Look kid I’m gas and flame make you collapse from strain
Harass your brain ass won’t maintain in this rap game
Best make a supreme attempt and don’t scream as a wimp
Team a bunch of pimps eat your rhymes for lunch like steam shrimp
Too fake and crummy to make money tote a blank cup
So you bankrupt your quotes don’t promote so your rank stuck
Dang you a stinking G go on a drinking spree make you drunk
With this funk, your butt flunk this course too much force in this junk
MISTAH_ TATE I’ll blister your fate

upping for responses

who the fuck are you, and why is it becomin a fad to diss me, who the fuck am i? eminem?

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

yo Mistah you better hope he dont get wit Mjust ad them cause he got a higher vocab than all of ya'll

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^^^ you know i had to put my 2 cent in it. and like i told Mjust, why dont ya'll just battle 3 of them. first tem to 2 victories wins

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Ayo look kid, dont get mad at me cuz yo rhymes lack common sense
you put your sorry shit up in open mic, and i dropped my two cents
now dont cry like a lil bitch and throw a hissy fit
just take it as criticism and elevate yo shit
cuz you see beef wit me always ends in tragedy
so i dont wanna have to make anotha enemy
murda him and then make his whole crew get back at me
cuz truthfully i dont go lookin to stir up controversy
dont judge me fa u know me just cuz u see i'm from the dirty
so get you some tissue and take you a nap
and when you wake up, realise how stupid u was and say "it's just a rap"

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

oh yea and my feed back. nice drop but throw some punches and personals in there next time. that was too bland. i didnt feel as if it were aimed at him. you couldve put anyones name on the title

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Thanks For The Feedback I Think Now I'm Understood Real Good Ha! Ha! Ha! Boy Got Ripped

nigga who got ripped? not me, i know i aint the only person who thinks your shit doesnt make any sense at all. i understand you was talkin about gas, but you had no aim at all, dont bitch and throw disses at people just because they give you honest feedback

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

made my point that shows you do understand my shit so I dusted your ass for that remember the mighty MADDRAPPER will get you kid HA! HA! HA!