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07-04-04, 11:31 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Life After Death
IP: 8264 FF24
Death is at my door knocking relentlessly
Pounding with his cold bony fist, Waiting for my uncertain reply I cannot think but he insists. I hear the noise deep in my soul Should I answer the unwanted call? Or turn and go out the door Forget about him, everything and all? The pounding is getting more persistint, The tears are falling from my eyes. My lips part slowly to tell him to leave, But all that escapes is a mournful cry. "I CANNOT DO THIS" I scream so very loud, My mind`s a whrilwind of thoughts. Each one never leaving but arriving, Each time tried but never caught. My shaky hands reach the front door, And I open my once before closed eyes. Taking a deep breath I swing it open, Only to find that I`ve already died.
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07-16-04, 03:47 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
nice poem keep up the good job
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07-16-04, 04:17 AM | #3 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 7C6F 690C
feelin dat...good imagery...nice word usage...keep dat comin...peace
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07-16-04, 04:26 AM | #4 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
that's hot way to go
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07-16-04, 06:03 AM | #5 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
this poem give a different mean to good it's great haha
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07-17-04, 03:20 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: EC0B 84C7
i like poem it's cool
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07-20-04, 04:05 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 82E9 6B69
thankz
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