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Old 07-21-04, 09:39 AM   #1
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don't walk away

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but i'm breathin please don't go away//
i'm dreamin of the las day i spent watchin ur face//
hopin this moment cudn't erased//
walkin in the shadows of the devil an pain//

verse 1
i hope you hear it maybe feel sum quarter of my pain~can't eat dream sleep without breathin ur name//
u talking with him its like a nightmare or phase~i'll make you see ur all of mah ache maybe jus one of these days//
i never meant to let you slip~who'd av thought throw yah strengh upon the 2 of us i'd be the link to lose grip//
lookin at the mirror to the relefection of a dick~these pills ain't helpin wen they makin me trip which in turn makin me flip feelin uncared cause the hurts worse like the ture from a rip//
suppose i'm lookin for the reason to which a lessons learned~thinkin more this destressing jus hurts~lookin at the ashes of the brigde were our love broke its last burn//
ur hearts broken~these cats provokin notions of moving forward an away false love with a spirit or beer like a potion~feelin crippled in motion of boastin feel showboatin is not easyin the pain but lookin away like u wanna fly but jus floatin//
an wen coke sends ur mind to find times of the tide wit the sea of love seemed to leave me strayed dead in the ocean//

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but i'm breathin please don't go away//
i'm dreamin of the las day i spent watchin ur face//
hopin this moment cudn't erased//
walkin in the shadows of the devil an pain//

Verse 2
the bottle is half finished this guiness is riches of reality deminished~wish this was the truth of the home were soul doesn't walk with dreams of witchs of cured sickness to send away from stitched lryics//
i an i want to know you~show u the ways which you know were ur hearts priceless with gold to be honoured with my soul with this shrine dedicated to every word can talk//
walk with the future unkown but without fear of the dark as we won't walk alone an face demons with the strengh of one other aswell as our own//
wish i had shown ur every fibre of life cememted with me ur silence will be the life long tourment u unintentionally bring//
u maybe hatin but i'm walkin to ur door showin mah change hopefully grown more an its all with dream that ur heart is sumhow not closed//
if it is i pray for happyness to ur path as ur pas made u walk~pray ur gladness will las as u attract the heavens in clouds of the sounds as you talk with such love in the passin with times~to the gate of ur soul is golden with the shine of ur eyes//
i think its bes if you do walk away~a heart with such strengh~doesn't desserve the degrade of my pain//
i'll love you tomorrow the nex day goin on days~wishin for the last moment were talkin then kissin i taste all the things i care for but waste it like its built up of paper mashay//
so please walk away if thats were ur heart takes you follow the only way you know~loving with grace an walk with throw the life with the smile which would light the coldest of face~most probaly best~please walk away//

Hook
but i'm breathin please don't go away//
i'm dreamin of the las day i spent watchin ur face//
hopin this moment cudn't erased//
walkin in the shadows of the devil an pain//
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Old 07-21-04, 06:42 PM   #2
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uppin
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Old 07-23-04, 06:36 AM   #3
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much to do
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Old 07-23-04, 08:30 AM   #4
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man you got skill fa sho
really enjoyed reading that
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Old 07-23-04, 01:39 PM   #5
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thank man, trying to adjust my style to a story format, beggin middle an end an stuff
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Old 07-24-04, 12:20 PM   #6
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Old 07-25-04, 09:34 AM   #7
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uppin
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Old 07-25-04, 06:05 PM   #8
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which way did he go?
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Old 07-26-04, 06:16 AM   #9
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Structure Was Fucked Vocab Needs Working On
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Old 07-26-04, 12:15 PM   #10
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hey that was tight homie its ya boy da vinchi
you cant write ,we'' keep doin it homie
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Old 07-26-04, 06:25 PM   #11
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Guess this dude like's my style. /\ /\ but damn,
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