10 - 15 Linez
NO BITING!!!!
NO FEEDING!!!!

U droppin first? Lemme know when you check in... 1.

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WHACK MUTHAFUCKAZ NEED TO KILL THA NOIZE....

Checkin In
Dont Matter Who Drop First
Jus Drop When You Ready....
Good Luck

You a whack MC, I called your style a pussy and ate it//

You get knocked like strippers takin money for cock, its sadly stated//

Im hot like stole glockz... my numbers scratched, serial, makin thunder crack...//

Ya dome, its own, enter tha zone, get blown//

Dont get caught home alone or you gone//

I spit Pinhead flows and pierce shit//

Call me tha Hellrazor, spillin blood on ya gators, fierce shit//

Im all war you jus a tug, my punches are like Ali they never forfeit tha gloves//

Man, this cat gets slapped, its really that serious//

He's gon' spill blood like I ended my rap wit a period//

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uppin this

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no contest but rif raf took this 1 easy he merked traj easy, trajedee try not to structure ur verse like that n the // thing is lame n makes u luk like a wack newbie..lol...but n e way ur vocab 2 is basic n simple riff raff i seen better battles frum u n this battle was not as gud i aint feelin the capital words in it

v - raff

remember to drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135183

thx
uppin

Vote RIff Raff

Rif Raf murdered every part of your verse with dope line.....

Either come correct or dont come at all


Can yall hit up my battles, there is like 3 or 4 a few people down

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ya riff raff took this one but tradjedee or how ever u say ur name (no disrespect) wasnt that far behind but riff took of and left u standin so..

v/riff

Trajed'ee

You a whack MC, I called your style a pussy and ate it//

You get knocked like strippers takin money for cock, its sadly stated//
there is nothing good about eating pussy lol 4/10

Im hot like stole glockz... my numbers scratched, serial, makin thunder crack...//

Ya dome, its own, enter tha zone, get blown//
no conection imaginative though 6/10

Dont get caught home alone or you gone//

I spit Pinhead flows and pierce shit//
weak 3/10

Im all war you jus a tug, my punches are like Ali they never forfeit tha gloves//

Man, this cat gets slapped, its really that serious//

He's gon' spill blood like I ended my rap wit a period//
one more comparssion to ali im sick of now she ending 4/10

17/40
4.25/10
well had one punch thats it no use for personals flow was ok structure is fucked could'v use more multis

!RIFF RAFF!

Like a LEPRACHAN in a DRY CLEANER, ya PRESSIN' ya LUCK
I'm like HAMMER in his glory days, I CAN'T BE TOUCHED
not bad 5/10

I'm the baddest bitch to ever step on this planet
spit lyrics so SICK not even DOCTORS can understand it
nice i like it 8/10

I don't wander off the subject, I get down to the specifics
have 2 review my rhymes twice cuz they complicated like hieroglyphics
over complicated it didnt sound right 4/10

Trajed'ee thinks he's got skill but he just cant see
beating him is simple like its simple counting one two three
basic personal 5/10

You lucky that theres no feeding, or i'd tear your ass to shreads,
Becausing everyones hating this nigger, like 300 sdizzle threads,
decent 6/10

28/50
5.6/10
riff raff there is some stuff there that i loved i think you took this battle due to harder punches and more personal good use of imagination
vote; riff raff

with respect for both of you

hit my battles for a retern of favor

peace

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yo I was feelin traj verse until Riff spit. Traj, I didnt really see a whole lot wrong except your structure and a misguided line. good wordplay, ok punches.

Riff a simple battle verse, good structure, nice wordplay, bangin punches.

vote: Riff

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136598

hit it up please.