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Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 12:41 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

HUH

what the fuck is this

Im checkin in now and you better drop your verse 20 minutes after i drop mine

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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 12:48 PM.

gottq krew, wish u do...
don't nobody wanna b~STUPID.UGLY.GOOSE~

wut da fuck is wrong wit u
is dat ~FRIED PORK~ gettin 2 u

~BOSTON~ bake bean betta continue 2 dream
u 24 u should kno ~S.U.G~will neva b a real team

ya names ICEPICK...cuz neva was a hot pick...
couldn't b bigger dan me n da game...if i was as tall as a hobbit

so stop like it...like a car at a red light
u ICE cold...n couldn't b hot if u was struck by sunlight

dat ain't rite...but its true dats y u turnin blue
or is it da fact dat ima necbrace...in diss game n im chockin u

he from BOSTON
HE TRYIN start a krew called S.U.G
he gotta thread called FRIED PORK

amayze has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 01:14 PM.

Still matic yeah right your a wack addict,
I Flip the script and dicks are for chicks ya silly rabbit

Bsketball son ya you good at dribbling balls,
You got ya coaches 9 pressed deep in ya jaws

Nas ether please your flow aint even worth it
I seen a couple of your last battles and their fuckin worthless.

Time to flip the flow

Your speech is negative, you never hit and you rhyme wack,
Trying to up the Anti so much will cause an Ante-Climax,

Necks get abused, ima take my keyboard and rape you with it
Started, late to finish, can't Take It Off with Naked lyrics!

Fool's ripped, This Battles Like Your Virginity...I'll Never Lose It!
Like bringing retards to Hands On class...i bet your Feeling Stupid

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S.U.G

is my realcrew in real life

i dont need no fuckin internet crews

Nice to see you posted befor i did

Good lookin

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Still matic yeah right your a wack addict,
I Flip the script and dicks are for chicks ya silly rabbit

Bsketball son ya you good at dribbling balls,
You got ya coaches 9 inches pressed deep in ya jaws

Nas ether please your flow aint even worth it
I seen a couple of your last battles and their fuckin worthless.

Time to flip the flow

Your speech is negative, you never hit and you rhyme wack,
Trying to up the Anti so much will cause an Ante-Climax,

Necks get abused, ima take my keyboard and rape you with it
Started, late to finish, can't Take It Off with Naked lyrics!

Fool's ripped, This Battles Like Your Virginity...I'll Never Lose It!
Like bringing retards to Hands On class...i bet your Feeling Stupid

yo lets get sum votes
n vote 4 deez other
batlles 4 me please
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

thanx

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Battle Verse 1
structure isnt very consistent...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was simple...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice multis...pretty good wordplay...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...Battle Verse 2 had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote...

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against Kizza...thanx...

I dont see my sig, so im assuming you cant either.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=137919

Please return the favor on that battle^^

Thanx.