![]() |
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
|
View Poll Results: is this verse: | |||
hot, I'm feelin it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
2 | 100.00% |
ok, but needs improvement |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
0 | 0% |
wack |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
0 | 0% |
Voters: 2. You may not vote on this poll |
![]() |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
New Jack
|
A Battle Rap I wrote. (please vote)
IP: FDD6 AE15
this was a battle rap I wrote awhile back, hope ya'll feelin it
Yo Shorty, only kid I know is nasty is you/ you worried about White, how bout I beat you black and blue?/ get you sick like the flu, when I spray lyrical diarhea/ I'm shittin on ya'll fools like Ludacris on Bia Bia/ Whoever said anything about love?/ Any love I get from you Im gon be needin a glove/ Gon catch a big fly, climbin walls like Torii Hunter/ then I run it back and kick you off like Im the punter/ you flappin like a loose cunt-er, maybe a flag/ a rainbow one that says 'Hey, I'm Calling all Fags'/ 'cause you a dirt mc, rappin bout how you the power/ Dunk your head in my toilet, spray you down with a golden shower/ Too many weak mc's try to outlast and capture/ Skeetin' on your face like you're givin me oral rapture/ It was a pleasure to disgrace ya face in my murderous landscape/ call the coroner, before I bring mourners, closed casket funerals stoppin haters with haste/ I can taste disgrace floating in the place, Kizza set the pace wit bold flavors ta be embraced/ looking for some feedback. |
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
New to RB
|
IP: 01CD 3A2F
Your flow is hot you were very discriptive with your lyrics i was feeling it alot.
|
|||||||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||
$Thug Life$
|
IP: 13B4 EB5B
yo kiz
you know i feel all yo shit but this shit was the bomb and the rhymes were very descriptive like SHY said. |
||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|