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i dont care who spit first...


DQ'ed... PMing for votes

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check...got 15 min then drop...

ayo check it!!!...

Let me bomb-this-imposter/
in battlez you bring "no style-N-punchez" like Amish-boxerz/
pardon-this, arsonist/
i tarnish-kidz-startin sh*t/
specially thoze who take skill and not have part-in-it/
kid, your less-then-me use discrepancy BEFORE bringing text-to-me/
yo your verze, like nun strip clubz.. in NO WAY interestin-me!/LoL
your rhymez are meaning-less which mean-they-wak/
punk kid, you cop so many beatingz like sega you "dream-of-cast'z"/
Toon nice name ? im best-fit-with-u callin me master/
your intestinez-get-splattered to bring pain like testicular cancer/
itz wrong-to-hate, but fagget mc'z i abominate/
such as Toon, spit online then with malez he likes to date/lol
victory against Toon, followed by nothing-less then morning-breath/
(ya dreamin kid,lol)
catch me scorning ya chest til ya i-net "family" mourning-at-best!/
each increment you see me spit-this-writ, my sentiment.. bring pain like dentist-kidz/
TOon the mic, i OWN-THIS.. you rent-the-shIt/

"VocalZ ill enuff to snap ya neck in two placez then tell you to get ya head straight"



THAT SHOULD DO THE *TRICK*

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elementary my dear watson
walks up...ice pick drops the mic and runs...haha...
ok...herb check it...

i aint a chick, and i dont lick pussy, but i can getthis ice dike-to-shiver...
think youll win?? u must be in 'da-nile'(denial)like-the-river//
Start to grieve, better believe you should be expecting ur first loss…
You couldn’t luck out if both sides of a coin were tails in a coin toss//
Lyrically beat you so bad they had to perform amputation…
i stopped ur heart beat so now there’s no blood circulatin//
i'll make u take death as its handed like `receiving pictures` of the 'devil'...
you winning is like a dwarf marrying snow white, its not true all fable//
Ill be the first to pronounce u burnt and throw a mic in ur grave…
Throw your bones in the great wall, then continue to pave//

herb...

yo in mah opinion ice pick took this battle because of his good multis
they both had good verses but i think ice pick took it

vote:ice pick

return the favor
delinquint. vs. Optimal

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are you serious?....his lines/syllables were all fucked up....wuteva...uppin

Ice Pick's Drop:

Let me bomb-this-imposter/
in battlez you bring "no style-N-punchez" like Amish-boxerz/
weak opener syllable was way off flow was not well done 3.5/10
pardon-this, arsonist/
i tarnish-kidz-startin sh*t/
specially thoze who take skill and not have part-in-it/
weak 2nd line was self-glorification line aswell....4/10
kid, your less-then-me use discrepancy BEFORE bringing text-to-me/
yo your verze, like nun strip clubz.. in NO WAY interestin-me!/
umm wordplay I saw thats cool wit me........7/10
your rhymez are meaning-less which mean-they-wak/
punk kid, you cop so many beatingz like sega you "dream-of-cast'z"/
nope....5/10
Toon nice name ? im best-fit-with-u callin me master/
your intestinez-get-splattered to bring pain like testicular cancer/
weak shit wasn't feeling it much 5/10
itz wrong-to-hate, but fagget mc'z i abominate/
such as Toon, spit online then with malez he likes to date/
okay this deserves a low ass score
mainly the because of the fact that gay lines are played
as fuck and uncreative also unless you don't have proof
don't even type it seriously 0/10
victory against Toon, followed by nothing-less then morning-breath/
catch me scorning ya chest til ya i-net "family" mourning-at-best!/
okay.....don't use that same sounding of words and spell it differently to me its odd......6.5/10
each increment you see me spit-this-writ, my sentiment.. bring pain like dentist-kidz/
TOon the mic, i OWN-THIS.. you rent-the-shIt/
2nd line was half-self glorification......6/10

overall: 4.5/10


Toon's Drop:

i aint a chick, and i dont lick pussy, but i can getthis ice dike-to-shiver...
think youll win?? u must be in 'da-nile'(denial)like-the-river//
haha nice wordplay pretty hot opener 8/10
Start to grieve, better believe you should be expecting ur first loss…
You couldn’t luck out if both sides of a coin were tails in a coin toss//
liking it 7.5/10
Lyrically beat you so bad they had to perform amputation…
i stopped ur heart beat so now there’s no blood circulatin//
damn...not hard hitting but in a way gruesome 6.5/10
i'll make u take death as its handed like `receiving pictures` of the 'devil'...
you winning is like a dwarf marrying snow white, its not true all fable//
yea liking it.....7/10
Ill be the first to pronounce u burnt and throw a mic in ur grave…
Throw your bones in the great wall, then continue to pave//
cold-hearted loving that shit 7/10

overall: 7.2/10

vote: Toon for much better flow/syllable count and harder hitting
punches aswell............................................ .................

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Uppn For Real Votes,\


Self Glorifacation < Thats Cool

His Whole Verse Looked Glorifying To Me

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lol.....wow...lol

uppin 4 real votes......who the fuck you think you are?

and how did his drop look glorifying to you???????????????
he didn't praise you in anyway shape or form get ya thoughts
straight fo real...

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word up man tonn rhymes hit harder with better puchies. Ice pick your verse was hot to dawg but toon was a little better
~one xplicit

i saw that da nile punch from somwhere...biter

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

yo repay the favor here http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135995
~one xplicit