5 barz....
5 to win
NO KO
House Rules.....
due in 30minutes- to 1 hour

Kid imma knock u out quick, leave ya jaw swollen like kanye west
You wouldn't have heart left in you if u was wearin a concrete vest
After this battle ya record will look like the last year the Lakers won *
Line 4? didn't need this many punches, had ya beat after tha 1st one
You call ya self a dragon,well man you can call me ya knight in armor
Cuz im slayin you easily, next time we battle i mite try a little harder
Check his profile, says he a student...thats cuz im schoolin this kid
Must have big balls, i give him props for attemptin to fool with this
When he set up he said NO KO, didn't wanna have to lose that fast
It dont matter, cuz when the polls read 5-0, u'll be glad to be in my past

* the lakers won in 2001, and when he loses his rec will be 0-1...

Plague's a little cocky like his night job alwayz on cocks, Ya bout to feel Black Dragon's heat but i aint talkin bout Glocks//1
The Black Plague heard bout the sickness, Call it The Fag Plague Cuz ur gay rhymes wanna make strate dudes grab dicks//2
U were the first to suggest NO KO, Juss wanted the voters to know, So now i see how u got that to fit in the flow//3
Well I won't fall in ur traps, Cuz Once Black Dragon attacks concrete cracks, Imma win this battle I'm juss spitten the facts//4
Plague u only like to see rainbow colors but fuckin wit me U gonna see Black, This dude couldn't get pussy even if he was Part of the show Cats//5

Haha, kid numbers his lines jus incase we lost count...lmao

Uppin

juss tryn to make it more professional son.........

The Black Plague

Kid imma knock u out quick, leave ya jaw swollen like kanye west
You wouldn't have heart left in you if u was wearin a concrete vest
->>what?

After this battle ya record will look like the last year the Lakers won *
Line 4? didn't need this many punches, had ya beat after tha 1st one
->>second line is filler but cool concept

You call ya self a dragon,well man you can call me ya knight in armor
Cuz im slayin you easily, next time we battle i mite try a little harder
->>decent

Check his profile, says he a student...thats cuz im schoolin this kid
Must have big balls, i give him props for attemptin to fool with this
->>second line is filler but cool

When he set up he said NO KO, didn't wanna have to lose that fast
It dont matter, cuz when the polls read 5-0, u'll be glad to be in my past
->>kinda weak



Black Dragon

Plague's a little cocky like his night job alwayz on cocks, Ya bout to feel Black Dragon's heat but i aint talkin bout Glocks//1
->>played

The Black Plague heard bout the sickness, Call it The Fag Plague Cuz ur gay rhymes wanna make strate dudes grab dicks//2
->>a gay joke? dude you are a genious...cmon kids

U were the first to suggest NO KO, Juss wanted the voters to know, So now i see how u got that to fit in the flow//3
->>feedin. and what does the last part after the comma mean

Well I won't fall in ur traps, Cuz Once Black Dragon attacks concrete cracks, Imma win this battle I'm juss spitten the facts//4
->>pretty cool

Plague u only like to see rainbow colors but fuckin wit me U gonna see Black, This dude couldn't get pussy even if he was Part of the show Cats//5
->>weak by the way i didnt know where to put this so all the bars in this were stretched as hell


black plague took this easily...black dragon you need to elevate and quit with // after your bars.

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ok:decent battle:
plague:you had the better verse here,you had better flow and structure, your punches hit harder and you had good opening and closing lines, which means you came hard and followed thru till the end......good
black dragon:you had the weaker verse here due to the punchlines you came with, you had no personals and ya lines were kinda stretched which messes with the flow,
but not bad, just constructive criticism....
VOTElague

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yo come on peeps and vote.......0-2 aiite thanx.......

yo vote and a drop a link so i can return the favor........

Alright Battle... Break Down

Black Plague- Verse Was Decent, Some Punches, Good Structure, Some Originality, And Some Wordplay, Punches Hit K, Structure Made Punches Better... Overal... Decent Verse....

Black Dragon- Verse Was Alright, Didnt Quite Match Up To Plagues, Flow Was Eh', The Finisher Was Played But Seemed To Be Best Line In Your Verse.... Overal Ok Verse....

Break Down II
Punches- Tie
Personals- Black Plague
Flow- Black Plague
Multis- Black Dragon
Wordplay- Tie
Metas- Black Dragon
Originality- Tie
Structure- Black Plague

Final Vote-------Black Plague

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fuckkkkk.. the whole black shit confused me.. i polled dragon instead of plague.... Mod Fix That For Me... My Vote Was For The Black Plague Not Black Dragon....

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aiite then thanx for ur vote and input 0-3........

Ok, 3-0, uppiin for some votes..

Drop links and i'll return favors...

Black Dragon your shit was ok but your struture was what brought your erse down
Black Plague what can i say you did it again punchlines, structure it was all there. Even though your puch lines were weak you still took it. Holla at your girl .
my vote Black Plague

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