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tell me what yall think bout it

lyrics:

hook:
its time to take it back....
to the days of the old school rap...
sittin on corners and talkin...
rapping and beat boxin...
lets take it back......

verse 1:
remember the days, they was insignificant-plain
the days of KRS-One, Tupac, and daddy kane
it was back when, back then it has changed
from rapping bout struggle to rapping bout fame
mapping out game, freestyles on the mic
listenin to the radio, while we sit and write
that was tite, now tis all about glam-and-glitter
jewels and war fare, rap is plainly littered
guns and knives, rapping bout the wrong toys
wangsters clapping back, bein somthin they aint like tomboys
verses back then, from public enemy
about going against the rules, but now they sendin me
the notion, they drinkin a poisenous potion
that makes them not as open...lets take it back

hook:
its time to take it back....
to the days of the old school rap...
sittin on corners and talkin...
rapping and beat boxin...
lets take it back......

verse 2:
everybodies hard now, tryin to be mafiosos
carryin weapons like samurais and Tykotos
feels like, im the only one tryin to bring it back
when i hear cats rapping over R&B it stings infact
im like stopp the singing, before i bring this thing in
my ears ringing, head feels like a roller coster when its lingering
some are still-awake, some are real-fake
some are hot, and some are jus not great
mabey its too late, youve heard the movement
but mabey it has no affect, your wack rap consumin
jesus aint gon walk wit you, you aint high-sent
nobe aint askin where the love is, askin where the rhymes went
erbody tryin to rap, infact even people not on the wire
erbody is biting like a room filled wit vampires
stop acting stiff, get mah drift or is dat what you lack
man fuck it, lets take it back....

hook:
its time to take it back....
to the days of the old school rap...
sittin on corners and talkin...
rapping and beat boxin...
lets take it back......

check one two...

ur voice sounds to make it forced
beats pretty good
lyrcis are good
sorta reminds me of the old school of pac just a little shitter lol
overall
6/10

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Uhmm the concept of this was hott.. But uhmm
You was stutterin like a freestyle, but you had the lyrics..
shouldnt be doin that, QUALITY IS HORRIBLE..
Not really feelin this joint, feelin the concept though..
Keep spittin, -pZ-

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