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Secret Annals
IP: 8032 D1F4
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Turn the pages and travel through the ages Put shameful secrets through painted paces Place a finger on the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Raise the linger of the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Read between the lines and witness the times Clear your minds and follow my rhymes Proof is blind in the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Truth is chimed in the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Verse 1: Ignoring premonition I step through the door Fleeing legend's frail floor to mythical shore Past myth's pious pore and mind's capped core When 'here' and 'now' seem concepts no more Yet where time's destined chore reminds us of war Crimes of clandestine yore not remembered before Blurring myriads of lore with fear, dread and gore Neither death nor ruin too sacred to explore Imploring devil’s vortex with sick, evil roar Atop history’s shelf ancient volumes and tome Hiding secrets and shames, of gold, grief and bone Of menace and clone wrecking spoil from high throne Killing millions with bold wreaked by passion of own Grown with demons of greed, stone-wrought cold all alone Kingdoms crumbled, empires thrown with no mercies shown Spelling sentences of demise in born fancies fast flown All morality is blown by acts of menial drones From the outside the mighty, but from the inside the crone Chorus x 1 Verse 2: In illusion flouting reprimand peoples make last stands Crusades across sands clashing sword, mace and lance Races in bands with clans cast in livid raged prance False honour and cause, Middle East, Britain and France Across continents, lands, plains of life, death and chance Hands hack and dance slashing, posing combat stance Rants and mauls sparking brawls with sick evil glance Like scurrying rats wild hordes clash in trance Predicaments of penance, religion’s gaunt plans Actions create coffins but actors mould the nails Through the dale of battle waves of blood ripple and sail Lakes of crimson ale, feeding land, sea and gale Quailing bodies of frail torn shapes in pitiful wail Bodies stiff and stale, laced in strings of entrails Flailed, ripped and cut, veined with fading bone hue pale Dreams shattered and jailed, faith shamed and failed Baleful rulers step over corpses to touch their grails Unlike the lies and tales, only death’s shadow prevails Yet over and over the powerful veil the shame of war’s trail Chorus x 1 And I weep for my brothers, why must we kill one another? HUH!? Chorus x 1 Oh how can I understand? Is this our fate's demand!? TELL ME!! (echo, fade)
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard ![]() Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats Last edited by Cerulean : 07-27-04 at 09:45 AM. |
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IP: 8032 D1F4
uppin for feedback!
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard ![]() Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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IP: C354 3622
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"There are three things of which the superior man stands in awe. He stands in awe of the ordinances of Heaven. He stands in awe of great men. He stands in awe of the words of sages." ![]() Last edited by Kintaro : 07-25-04 at 05:33 AM. |
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IP: 5C3E 0FF3
uppin for feedback again
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IP: 5C3E 0FF3
come on.... nobody got any thoughts or feedback spare for this?
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IP: 4289 77F4
im feeling the verse but im not really too high on the chorus maybe because im reading it instead of hearing it ..but it was nice shit the verse had nice vocab nice flow to it and the topic was medicore but u made it nice. make this an audio n it'll prolly get more feedback
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IP: 5C3E 0FF3
yeah, thanks for the feedback! i'll try and audio this soon but i think it still needs some work that's why i was posting it in open mic fÃ-rst to see if people could give me helpful crit. i know the topic is a bit played, but this track is sort of intended as an intro to a track about timetravelling i'm writing for my text album right now. thanks again for your comment!
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