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Check in by: 07-31-04 at 06:55 PM

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phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 06:56 PM.

yo nigga ill leave a hole in your chest weres da treasure im gettin a million coins while im gettin pleasure blam why the fuck you tryin 2 punch me in da face sit down im a plastic surgin ill change your face your a discrace half my niggas was a thing to waste im only thirteen on my fifthteen drink i need a chance to think weres this nigga going hes tryin 2 run away while my lyrics still blowin yo nigga dont try to mess my mind up ill fuckin pull your spine out ill take your rings and lines aswell as your 9 i keep extra clips for shit on your marks get set 1 bullets your death now u betta take your last breath ill rip out ya throat while you in this battle you bout 2 choke lungs filled up wid smoke u aint Mrster.E you bout 2 become history and its gettin dark i cant c wats da time fck you nigga im out im closin da blinds

Myster.E has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:45 PM.

Yo homo don't no show, watch the poll vote flo my way, I'll shine like hair full of Soul Glo on a dry day,
Nothin you say is more important than what I say, I'll get rid of you usin fly spray,
The piss I take you'll swallow, then I'll leave you hollo wit hollos,
Wherever I go you'll follo, cuz ur the dog but I'm barkin I'm embarkin on killin like there's no tomoro,
Your a fake, rhymer I'll brake you like I break china, then slit your eyes so you can see China,
I shouldn't be dissin you I'm your childminder, I'll make you so sad you'll need a smile finder,
but right now you need a style finder,you style biter, another battle to add to my file binder,
You want a match? I give you a lit one after I douse you in petrol if you can catch,
I'll leave you in a coffin with a locked latch, and bury you on a mud patch,
You rappin batch couldn't scratch if it had claws, you suck like you don't lack straws,
You still cant hide your shit in black draws, you can scream 'aww shit' when the mack draws,
As I creep in your backdoor, real quiet like I got cat's paws, I'd only play your shit in fast pause,

Voted For: Myster.E

One Im Voteing For-Verse Was Alot Better Than The Other Guy... Flow Was On Point, Verse Was Original And Hit Harder Than The Other Guys Did.... Structure Was Good And Metaz Were Decent As Well As Wordplay...

Other Guy- Structure Was Bad.. Flow Was Good. But Punches Didnt Connect Well... Overal Not To Good Verse...

Vote- The Guy It Said I Voted For At The Top... Peace

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Voted For: Myster.E

Yeah!! Nice shit E. I like yo structure, multis, and over all flow...basically you ripped o boi. nah mean. Punches were ok, but hit alot harder than o bois. Holla.

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Voted For: Myster.E

Battle Verse 1
structure isnt very good...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had nice multis...good wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
no structure at all...u didnt even seperate ur lines man...no flow, cause u didnt have a structure...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches conected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...Battle Verse 1 had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 1 gets my vote..

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 1

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Thanx.

uppin...
this is my fouth unclosed battle and I'm gettin pissed dammit

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Black Man White(BMW)
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I need votes for this shit to get closed wtf
uppin

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Black Man White(BMW)
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Up Up and away my last time help me close this people

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Voted For: Myster.E

ok flow to myster
the nigga phatnum aint rhyme in parts and i couldnt follow for shit
personals neither had any good but myster had some aight disses which phatinum lacked
myster had a better verse and punches but what the fuck is fast pause???!!!
vote myster for flow vocab and better punches



vote honest and i return the favor always vote honest

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