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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
$ Wordman $ 1 16.67%
...Superior... 5 83.33%
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Old 07-28-04, 09:14 AM   #1
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...Superior... vs $ Wordman $

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Old 07-28-04, 09:17 AM   #2
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$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:17 AM.
 
Old 07-28-04, 09:17 AM   #3
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...Superior... has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:17 AM.
 
Old 07-28-04, 10:48 AM   #4
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Aight Yo... Here I go!!!

imm'a Rip this kid up like another Inferior-Wack-Opponent
This Kids just a Netcee, Superior-Lacking-Rap-Component
Lay Yah Stanza Down Bro, Then Tell Us who wrote it??
damaging this Groupie's Credit, For Calling me out Ta battle
Stuck in a fierce State of Regret, Of Trying to jump on a real emcee's Saddle
I Speak the Trueset Shit , Spitting about Myself
Only way your Lyrics would get bought, is if you were a Toy On da Store Shelf.
Beating this Kid Down Faster Then a Summer Fling
The Only return* he witnessed was Lord Of the Rings



* under his name it says THE RETURN OF
 
Old 07-28-04, 10:51 AM   #5
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well just got back and Key'd it In.. .

Peace.... Waiting on the Reply..
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Old 07-28-04, 10:52 AM   #6
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O shit....lmao sorry forgot you cant see the verses till we both drop

i'll drop in like 10 15 mins..
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Old 07-28-04, 11:03 AM   #7
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You're probably shook, asking for votes from anonymous peeps
You should just stick to postin your favorite rap song of the week
Rip this kid to shreds and leave his big ego trampled
So I can drop Wordman like clumsy doctors with piss samples
I’m putting a stop to wordman like my bladder was clogged, closing the gate
Come on Your punches are wack, like lazy lovers their never up to date
Why’d you accept I said I need to battle someone who’s a worthy foe
Didn’t need this battle to show your more washed up than a toilet bowl
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Old 07-28-04, 11:07 AM   #8
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I was likin da punches and metas. return da fav. y'all
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399
 
Old 07-28-04, 11:37 AM   #9
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Yo... Ok... I want Explained Votes... I fucken Hate it when People do that
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Old 07-28-04, 11:56 AM   #10
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This was feedback posted for ...Superior...

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This verse got it in my opinion...the stucture was better & also he had better wordplay, rhyming and overall a better verse...it was entertaining to read and the rhyming was better overall...flowed nicely and on point so battle verse# 2 gets it...
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Old 07-28-04, 12:38 PM   #11
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uppin this shit make sure you vote
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Old 07-28-04, 12:52 PM   #12
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Voted For: ...Superior...

yo even though we beefin ur punches connected and ya shit flowed more all about even no personals like the 1st verse but i think superior took it by alil

punches: sup
personals: v1
multis:v1
metas: sup
flow:sup
creativity: sup

vote: sup
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Old 07-28-04, 03:23 PM   #13
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uppin this ish
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Old 07-28-04, 03:33 PM   #14
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Voted For: $ Wordman $

this battle goes to superior definetly his punches were better and it just all around flowed.
the other guys shit was not on point and it was too simple he need to up his game up and he'll have some good structure goin v=superior
return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136612
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648
 
Old 07-28-04, 03:39 PM   #15
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i vote # 1....
blah: #2's toy shelf line needs to be voided, ppl buy toys off the shelf any ways, its not likes its abnormal.
this verse had good flow, nice structure, and landed punches.

return the favor, seeriously'

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136635
 
 


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