you know all tha rulez os lets spit 10 ta 20 line and 30 mins afat check in

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

your first aiight ................................

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

rulez, ne feeding, no biting, no dr, no crew, bullshit. just spit a verse and let the niggaz vote. be Im spit after this, this my check.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

My rapper is 2 pax resurrection, yes kids he's back/
But look at biggies resurrectin, yes kids, he's on his back/
Layed out flat, never made it to bitchslaped for chit chat/
couldnt write who he battling...too scared of how voters would act/
so whach me handle him, work around em like Im trying to grow a 6 pack/
Friesh like a big bag of tik taks, so Id wish Ud bite me quickly/
U couldnt flow lyrically, so Peg cities hopes and dreams whent down wit Biggie/
ask diddy, I'll break Ur spine wit swift punchlines to ur skull/
Render U useless cuz beef gets eaten, cooked or raw in a lunch bowl/
Cuz I aint a rapper, Im the gift inside that U work hard to deliva'/
XL, U still aint big enough to take this lyrical rapsody nigga'/

Good luck kid. I'll check on this 2morrow.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

that was like about 15 min or less right. uppin for big to check in.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

im checkin in bithch lol ............................................

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

this fagget porbally didn;t rite hi own shit ill cahre him for Eyedentyde theft
when im done wit you cuz you know wont if thats you cuz they'll be nutin left
so don't test me bitch cuz ill pull some harcore shit on ya ass brah
are you a lost do you evan know ya onw identidy ill just ask ya
when im done wit ya fool you feel like you been popin shit like walter macardy
and get you note book cuz im a skewl ya and bitch don't bt tardy
ill let you see how in verse you life turned you worst
and ill kill ya fagget when my gun burst ill take your life first....
your dignity will be gone like vanila ice afta his first single
and bitch you just a bugger like beatel how bout i call you rigo
cuz i got my arsnel and i got my ritgh hand on ma pistol
and shit im the emcee tha to hard to hanf im a fist full
cuz i treat ya like you one of them g-unit bitches
and you bette not pull a fiddy turn it 2 on of de snitches
cuz run tell som body its ya worst day
ill leave wit a scared face and ill kill ya in tha worst way
im done And singing out is tha motha Fuckin B-i-g-g-i-e
and now i pul WC and kill ya in tha Killa Cali

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

first line *************************
this fagget porbally didn't rite hi own shit they'll charge him for Eyedentyde theft

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

^^^lol, that aint gonna help much. U got destroyed homie. I never could go through an opponents lyrics and loose all desire to keep reading it. no beef tho. that was for the whole



Uppin for votes up in this shit.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Ur spelling and type o's are even worst than mine? ha ha ha. good try at it tho, now lets get them votes in and check out my other battles in my sig.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

EyeDentdy

My rapper is 2 pax resurrection, yes kids he's back/
But look at biggies resurrectin, yes kids, he's on his back/
->>second line kinda stretched but i liked it

Layed out flat, never made it to bitchslaped for chit chat/
couldnt write who he battling...too scared of how voters would act/
so whach me handle him, work around em like Im trying to grow a 6 pack/
->>the first two were cool but the third one didnt connect

Friesh like a big bag of tik taks, so Id wish Ud bite me quickly/
U couldnt flow lyrically, so Peg cities hopes and dreams whent down wit Biggie/
->>second line stretched again but the tic tacs thing was hot

ask diddy, I'll break Ur spine wit swift punchlines to ur skull/
Render U useless cuz beef gets eaten, cooked or raw in a lunch bowl/
->>wtf is a lunch bowl? my least favorite line

Cuz I aint a rapper, Im the gift inside that U work hard to deliva'/
XL, U still aint big enough to take this lyrical rapsody nigga'/
->>pretty good closer

Biggie_XL

this fagget porbally didn;t rite hi own shit ill cahre him for Eyedentyde theft
when im done wit you cuz you know wont if thats you cuz they'll be nutin left
->>second line was 6 kinds of wack and you gotta get spell check

so don't test me bitch cuz ill pull some harcore shit on ya ass brah
are you a lost do you evan know ya onw identidy ill just ask ya
->>not feelin it

when im done wit ya fool you feel like you been popin shit like walter macardy
and get you note book cuz im a skewl ya and bitch don't bt tardy
->>so-so

ill let you see how in verse you life turned you worst
and ill kill ya fagget when my gun burst ill take your life first....
->>first line didnt make sense at all

your dignity will be gone like vanila ice afta his first single
and bitch you just a bugger like beatel how bout i call you rigo
->>i liked this line

cuz i got my arsnel and i got my ritgh hand on ma pistol
and shit im the emcee tha to hard to hanf im a fist full
->>gun talk in a text? played

cuz i treat ya like you one of them g-unit bitches
and you bette not pull a fiddy turn it 2 on of de snitches
->>wack

cuz run tell som body its ya worst day
ill leave wit a scared face and ill kill ya in tha worst way
->>filler

im done And singing out is tha motha Fuckin B-i-g-g-i-e
and now i pul WC and kill ya in tha Killa Cali
->>quit spelling your name out it ruins every line you do it in

no hate but Eyedentdy merked you ...keep elevatin and get your game up with some noobs. Also get a spell checker bc your shit is hard to read and it just pisses people off.

v/Eyedentdy

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^^ REALLY nice voting there^^ yo agree with schema accept i dont belive E' merked him dat much but he still won tho... no hatin i just belive dat

vote on this pleaseeeeeeeeeeee return the favor plz even if u didnt like my vote

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

EyEDeNtDy-you fuckin merked him....plus your verse was easier to understand than his....and you just plain out merked him

Biggie XL- You seriously got merked....your spelling was horrible and that spelling out your name ruined your closer and the opener was wack and everything else was ok....but it would have been better if you spelled shit right....no beef but you got merked (look at the key board when you type) lol

v/Eyedentdy Return the favor E

(Me VS Ruff Tuff Thug)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136633

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no hatin but diss battle
was kinda weak but
to me EYEDENTDY flow
was much better n his
structure so i gave it 2 him
v/EYEDENTDY