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07-30-04, 01:34 PM | #1 | ||||
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a rap in progress
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i aint clamin to be the hardest rap artist alive//
im clamin to be the only rap artist to starve and not die// i get by by gettin high cuz i have to deal with these people who constantly try,to eat through people// with verbal attacks when theyre eyes anint lookin// im the people's champ ya smell what chills cookin?// go ahead you can keep on lookin but you cant see a ghost// so from pillar to post im the man with the most... thats all i've got so far tell me what you think lookin for some feed back and ideas how to make it better
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o.. I'll fuckin.. I'll.. I'll puke, eat it, and freak you (eww) Battle? I'm too weeded to speak to The only key that I see to defeat you would be for me to remove these two Adidas and beat you and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you ....Em is sick ....just plain sick Last edited by .:CHiLL:. : 07-31-04 at 11:42 AM. |
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07-31-04, 11:52 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: EA3C CECF
lookin for feed back
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o.. I'll fuckin.. I'll.. I'll puke, eat it, and freak you (eww) Battle? I'm too weeded to speak to The only key that I see to defeat you would be for me to remove these two Adidas and beat you and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you ....Em is sick ....just plain sick |
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