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Old 08-01-04, 08:59 PM   #1
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Indisputable principle, attaching pain that's afflictable
Cause it's lyrically critical for my words to be cynical
For my rhymes to record the many evils of humanity
And to expose their pivital and spiritual blasphemy
My pen will continue to bleed the pure essence of life
It can forever deny God and the presence of Christ
I'll swallow the alphabet and spit out a dictionary
My dictions vary, from being a warrior to a visionary
My friend, have you heard the word of a god absurd?
And the then commandments that an elder observed?
Paranoid, I'm constantly aware that god is watching me
But I watch back, dropping sleep in search of prophecy
Are horrible incidents of man going to remain historical?
Be very silent because that question will stay rhetorical
It's definetely not affordable to lose that evil knowledge
So I read the carnage and with words, I pay homage
I learn things about a virus, war, and blood splatters
But I still can't find a book that tells me love matters
I will devote myself to writing down the most truthful words
Almost losing god and spitting in the ignorant face of lucifer
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Old 08-02-04, 12:53 AM   #2
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Well, this definately had a lot of multies...Sometimes it seemed force and I wish your vocab may of came a little stronger but, all in all this was nice. I liked your format and your structure....keep it real...
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Old 08-02-04, 01:45 AM   #3
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ya...dis was a nice drop kidd....it had a hell of alot of multies in dat...like dat last line 2...dat was ill...peace
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Old 08-02-04, 01:03 PM   #4
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that was offical sun fo sho.good wordplay and vocab and i like the thoughts till i found Islam i felt the same shit dogg and i understand the spitual struggle a nigga go through .good shit
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Old 08-02-04, 01:03 PM   #5
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Damn You Good Nice Drop Therer Nice Poem I Give You A 9/10
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